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March 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
wow...rin the whore. yes I said it and she's a dumb whore too. who the fuck cares about the pics!! they tried to rape her. They've openly admitted to killing and raping other girls. I think that is more important than a few naked and bound pics. actually it only proves that they held her against her will and were going to do horrible things. So what if miroku released her. HE'S STILL A MURDERING RAPIST!!! Like the fuck girl, get a clue. and she has the nerve to thank him, like he was doing it out of the kindness of her heart. I hate dumb bitches and this story seems to be filled with them. I'm not saying you're a bad writer but I think I'm gonna back away from this story before I lose my mind hating all the characters.
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June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I wanted to shake the computer when I got to the end of the chapter. This is a really, Really, REALLY great story. I'm glad nothing happened to Rin. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Update soon. ^_~
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April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, noez! And I thought we were getting ready for some Inu/Kag nookie! *pouts dramatically* Come on, girl! I seriously need to read some action! :D Sheesh, guess I'll have to go write my own!
Speaking of which, I need to PM you...expect a message from me on LJ. LOL
Anyway, amazing chapter, girlie! I'm so into this story, and I'm waiting to see how InuYasha deals with Miroku's betrayal...me thinks that won't be pretty! Update soon! 0.~
Speaking of which, I need to PM you...expect a message from me on LJ. LOL
Anyway, amazing chapter, girlie! I'm so into this story, and I'm waiting to see how InuYasha deals with Miroku's betrayal...me thinks that won't be pretty! Update soon! 0.~
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April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey ShouraiChan,
its me again your fav fangirl reader/reviewer...lol. OMG OMG I am so glad I got u rave on my reply so much...giggles.. I feel so special thx..lol I laughed so hard when I read your reply. *hugs writer and squeezes* I LOVE THIS ChAPTER it was unexpected. Please never apologize for ruining panties, it is your duty really feel honoured...ROFL Miroku is offically meh boy, I am sorry I did not expect to help rin escape on nothing more than a date, and oh my god he cares for her, at first I thought it was another one of his sinister plot to taunt rin for this sick game they were playing but how he helped her and held when she cried, and didnt ask for more than a date. I am flabbergasted. She is so innocent poor thing is so confused but I so glad that she is feeling for him, and Happy danced when kagome got her. *Hugs shourai again* I know kagome will understand and I am sorry but I demand a rin/miroku in this fic they r my fav couple now...lol. I hope they end up together...sigh with wistful eyes* Oh and I loved the whole kags/inu chemistry but I am sorry for his ass with kagome rage please make the fight have plenty of ripped clothing, scratching and groping and a fight for domination....sorry there my fangirl mind ran away with me....not really sorry though.hahahaha oh and whats gonna happen between kouga and kags now that rin knows he is part of the brotherhood. OH my so much has hit the ceiling oh its on. Update soon.
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Scarlet
its me again your fav fangirl reader/reviewer...lol. OMG OMG I am so glad I got u rave on my reply so much...giggles.. I feel so special thx..lol I laughed so hard when I read your reply. *hugs writer and squeezes* I LOVE THIS ChAPTER it was unexpected. Please never apologize for ruining panties, it is your duty really feel honoured...ROFL Miroku is offically meh boy, I am sorry I did not expect to help rin escape on nothing more than a date, and oh my god he cares for her, at first I thought it was another one of his sinister plot to taunt rin for this sick game they were playing but how he helped her and held when she cried, and didnt ask for more than a date. I am flabbergasted. She is so innocent poor thing is so confused but I so glad that she is feeling for him, and Happy danced when kagome got her. *Hugs shourai again* I know kagome will understand and I am sorry but I demand a rin/miroku in this fic they r my fav couple now...lol. I hope they end up together...sigh with wistful eyes* Oh and I loved the whole kags/inu chemistry but I am sorry for his ass with kagome rage please make the fight have plenty of ripped clothing, scratching and groping and a fight for domination....sorry there my fangirl mind ran away with me....not really sorry though.hahahaha oh and whats gonna happen between kouga and kags now that rin knows he is part of the brotherhood. OH my so much has hit the ceiling oh its on. Update soon.
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Scarlet
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April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay....I love how you did this!!!!!!!
And yes even if you blush again, I believe this story could be just like Shades of Gray...and you are so welcome, I don't usually share that story with a lot of people unless I feel they could really handle it. Now down to the real business here....
UPDATE SOON! I want to...no I NEED to see what Kagome plans on doing with our 'innocent' Inuyasha. Thanks to you I'll be sitting on the edge of my sit trying to wait for a new update. O.<....
Don't leave a home girl hangin!!!!
And yes even if you blush again, I believe this story could be just like Shades of Gray...and you are so welcome, I don't usually share that story with a lot of people unless I feel they could really handle it. Now down to the real business here....
UPDATE SOON! I want to...no I NEED to see what Kagome plans on doing with our 'innocent' Inuyasha. Thanks to you I'll be sitting on the edge of my sit trying to wait for a new update. O.<....
Don't leave a home girl hangin!!!!
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April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Dun dun dun... Love it.. as always.. I am having such a hard time choosing which fic of yours I enjoy most.. AND... There was no 'hanky panky' between Kougs and Kags either.. (giggle)
Couldn't help myself from adding that..
Hugs and can't wait for more, as always.. I sound like a broken record.
Alpine
Couldn't help myself from adding that..
Hugs and can't wait for more, as always.. I sound like a broken record.
Alpine
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March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey shouraiChan,
HUGS to a great author and another good chapter. But first I am so humbled and happy that u loved mu reviews so much and I am so pleased that it is appreciated. BOWS. And I only review this way to ppl who deserve it and trust me my dear u have peaked my naughty interests and I love your fic so much I am foaming at the mouth and destroying panties...lol. And I only speak the truth in my reviews so again I am happy for your excitement and 3 separate replies...yayayayayayaa. And u have my imagination running so much with this story and I LOVE a DOMINATING INU so badly. And yes sesshy in Inu's position is frightening, and yes there was a slight little mention of him...lol. Your rin is a sweet firecracker, and i am glad its her in that position cause it makes the story all that more interesting and geez I appluad u for making miroku seem sinister as naraku and just as smooth...a spider demon he tie me up in his web....lol. And I am begging and pleading like a whore on the corner in the throes of ecstacy for more rin/miroku in this story its just to yummy to pass up. Please...MORE, PLEase release me....lol lol
I am pleased u also like my review on the state of other ppl wanting u to change inu and i am honoured that u like my response so much u quoted me...lol. Anyway onto the 4th chappy, geez it that is a party, and i have been to some parties like that where anything goes even sex on the wall, heck I think i was guilty of that one time too, hey u only live once...muahahahaha. Anyway i loved the tension and revelations and POV in this chapter. i loved that kouga is wary of inuyasha around kagome, and especially the fact how miroku witnessed them on the dance floor. i think the chapter was rightly named...lol. So the attraction begins. So let the game truly begin, I hope kouga doesn't get hurt to bad when shit hits the ceiling between kags and inu...sigh I am just so scared what they r gonna do with rin as well. I cant wait for next chapter cause I want to know...pouts and sighs. Keep up the great domineering and dark writing and update soon please.
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Scarlet
HUGS to a great author and another good chapter. But first I am so humbled and happy that u loved mu reviews so much and I am so pleased that it is appreciated. BOWS. And I only review this way to ppl who deserve it and trust me my dear u have peaked my naughty interests and I love your fic so much I am foaming at the mouth and destroying panties...lol. And I only speak the truth in my reviews so again I am happy for your excitement and 3 separate replies...yayayayayayaa. And u have my imagination running so much with this story and I LOVE a DOMINATING INU so badly. And yes sesshy in Inu's position is frightening, and yes there was a slight little mention of him...lol. Your rin is a sweet firecracker, and i am glad its her in that position cause it makes the story all that more interesting and geez I appluad u for making miroku seem sinister as naraku and just as smooth...a spider demon he tie me up in his web....lol. And I am begging and pleading like a whore on the corner in the throes of ecstacy for more rin/miroku in this story its just to yummy to pass up. Please...MORE, PLEase release me....lol lol
I am pleased u also like my review on the state of other ppl wanting u to change inu and i am honoured that u like my response so much u quoted me...lol. Anyway onto the 4th chappy, geez it that is a party, and i have been to some parties like that where anything goes even sex on the wall, heck I think i was guilty of that one time too, hey u only live once...muahahahaha. Anyway i loved the tension and revelations and POV in this chapter. i loved that kouga is wary of inuyasha around kagome, and especially the fact how miroku witnessed them on the dance floor. i think the chapter was rightly named...lol. So the attraction begins. So let the game truly begin, I hope kouga doesn't get hurt to bad when shit hits the ceiling between kags and inu...sigh I am just so scared what they r gonna do with rin as well. I cant wait for next chapter cause I want to know...pouts and sighs. Keep up the great domineering and dark writing and update soon please.
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Scarlet
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March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi ya girl.
Oh dear! 'He wondered what would happen if he stole a peak into her heart. What kind of torrid fantasies would he find there? Which ones could he make real?' I'm assuming this has something to do with his little box that he's trying to keep hidden. I'm just guessing, but it must be something that has been handed down over the last 1000 years so that the youkai in charge can get a woman to sleep with him (so that he can get her powers). Ah! So that's why Inuyasha isn't a rapist? He can manipulate a woman into having sex with him? Well, I still think Inu is BAD. I'm rooting for Koga now. (Which again, makes me so sad since I am an Inu/Kag shipper...)
Ok so what's next? Will Kagome rescue Rin in time (I hope). Is Kilala on the way? Will Sango show up in her sexy outfit and get Miroku's panties in a bunch? Is Inuyasha going to start to fall for Kagome mainly because he can't have her since she is Koga's? And what will Inuyasha find when he examines her heart? If she's anything like the manga version she'll have a pure heart. I wonder how he'll take that?
OK. Please redeem Inuyasha... I hope...
Oh dear! 'He wondered what would happen if he stole a peak into her heart. What kind of torrid fantasies would he find there? Which ones could he make real?' I'm assuming this has something to do with his little box that he's trying to keep hidden. I'm just guessing, but it must be something that has been handed down over the last 1000 years so that the youkai in charge can get a woman to sleep with him (so that he can get her powers). Ah! So that's why Inuyasha isn't a rapist? He can manipulate a woman into having sex with him? Well, I still think Inu is BAD. I'm rooting for Koga now. (Which again, makes me so sad since I am an Inu/Kag shipper...)
Ok so what's next? Will Kagome rescue Rin in time (I hope). Is Kilala on the way? Will Sango show up in her sexy outfit and get Miroku's panties in a bunch? Is Inuyasha going to start to fall for Kagome mainly because he can't have her since she is Koga's? And what will Inuyasha find when he examines her heart? If she's anything like the manga version she'll have a pure heart. I wonder how he'll take that?
OK. Please redeem Inuyasha... I hope...
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March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay for updates is right... You say you will update soon.. and look at that, there it is.. This story really has my interest piqued... I really can't wait to see how Inu/Kag goes from here... Please update again soon.. I will always leave a loving review...
Hugs
Alpine
Hugs
Alpine
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March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story has plot, sex, drugs, sex, passion, sex, originality, oh did I mention sex. This is great. Please keep it going. If you continues like this I could so see this story being put up there with 'Shades of Gray' by fallenangel7583. It is really that good, please give us more.