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for Completely Innocent Encounters

by katty

schedule January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was brilliant, loved the chemistry and the story and the fact that they bathed together and he was her permenant peeping tom...lol. But I almost died at the last part the humilation OMG.....lol. It was swell.

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person wudelfin
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOL!! that was awsome
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Too funny, but oh, poor Kagome having her first time interrupted like that. :)
person Ladylara
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was awesome! I loved it, there was just enough of everything! I love shippo's final sentence. Great work!
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
My god, you are fantastic. It was just too much. I couldn't help but to laugh at some of this. Your a great writer and maybe it should be a little more then a one shot *winks*