rate_review Reviews

Hey I really like this, it has a feeling of freedom mixed with magic. Are you a Disney Pocahontas fan? The whole idea of wind from fate reminded me of it, and it made your story that much better!

holy shit! She's a demon! The whole idea of the rose was so different! Where'd you get it from? Also, the way you introduced Sesshomaru was thrilling.

The grammar and spelling isn't that bad. Just remember to run your checks and read over it once and you'll catch most errors and be ahead of a lot of ff authors! As for the story not bad I'll keep reading for now. I'm interested to see if you'll have Kagome explain who she is. I'm always a fan of being upfront in stories like this just because it saves a lot of trouble later on when the deception is discovered but it is popular to build the drama by having the deception and creating distrust through a sense of betrayal later on.

So I'm just a little confused. Is Kagome a demon now?
I think you should get someone to reread and fix all your
grammar and such! It'd make the story ten times better!
(Not that I don't like your story!) I hope you continue onward!
Good luck!

I really have been enjoying this. I love your twist on Kagome resolving that Inuyasha was not worth it. I wonder what is up with the flowers. I can't wait for more.

Please please pah-leeze keep going!!!!! You left it at a cliffy......I hate cliffies! But I love the story.

Hey hun, this looks pretty good so far, it definitely has some serious potential. There were a few spelling and grammar mistakes but all in all it has a nice flow to it.