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for Mistletoe

by BlackMaiden

schedule October 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It was very cute! And I enjoyed the simpleness of it. Thank you.
person Anon
schedule April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I thought this story was just lovely. It had all the players very nicely in character and the idea of the mistletoe was really charming. I love the way you have Rin build up her courage by kissing Ah-Un and Jaken first and then being really brave and kissing Sesshoumaru.

His response by putting the mistletoe over every sweet and luscious part of Rin was romantic and just explicit enough to make a pleasant shiver run over me. I love your clear and elegant style of writing. Well done.
person peasoup3
schedule March 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I thought this was super cute just enough lemon before it got too lewd. Gives me great ideas for next holiday season.
person niako-san
schedule October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I think you found a new interesting way to use mistletoe.
person Keva
schedule April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You didn't leave me a way to contact you so I will respond here.

Thanks for the awesome review on What Darkness Brings. Although I do have to say it's one of my more cheesy stories and I've never really been all that fond of it. Actually it is on my list for a rewrite; which one day I will get around to doing. Still it makes me happy to know people still like it:)

As for exchanging challenges; we could exchange them but I don't know how long it would take me to do one as I am so back logged on what I have posted that isn't finished yet in this fandom and the KH fandom. Not to mention the requests I get for stories; although most of those will never get written due to me not being interested in the plot lines or the plots are way to cliched and I'm not really fond of doing the same ol plot that's been done a million times. Yet we could give it a shot and maybe I could kick out a quick couple of one shots or something. It's worth a shot.

Anyway; again thanks for reading and thanks for the review and I am glad I could entertain. Much love. Keva
person orvida
schedule December 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
heheh you have certainly given new meaning tothe term under the misletoe.

Anyway i just love this story so sexual and sweet and most definitely to the point.^^
person Ruuka
schedule December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awee! That was so cute!
I liked it. Great Christmas Present !:)
person adeaneri
schedule December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow sweet.