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December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
cool. short and sweet. i got the point. great writting
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December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AW DAMN! I wish it were longer, lol! But I definitely liked it!!! Great job and awesome suspense!
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December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was HOOOOOOOOOOT! Way too hot to be kept a oneshot in my opinion, but you do what you do. Excellent! :)
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December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I Love it and I cant wait to see what happens next
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December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It woud be good to see more like this one, I like your descriptions they are moving.
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December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i didn't quite understand this, but the mystery of it is kind of sexy...