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for Butterfly

by jessicashae2005

schedule December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Don't get pissed off because somebody didn't like this and thought it was a waste, people like that should be ignored. I read the fic and I thought it was sweet. It was well written, I didn't notice any grammar errors or misspellings. So go out there and keep writing. If people can't give you a CONSTRUCTIVE criticism, then their comments are meaningless.
person wudelfin
schedule December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
rather sweet
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow-- I almost cried reading this. I had an experience just like this-- my baby died about two weeks ago and I never got to see if he had his daddy's eyes.. this story was absolutely lovely honey. Don't let anyone ever tell you different! I have persona;;y never heard the song--- but now-- I kinda wanna.
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. Never heard the song before now, but I liked it, too. My only criticism is that the fic seemed to just directly copy the song. Not a bad thing, just not really some people's cup of tea.

And don't worry, I seem to have my own personal flamer too. They just don't know what good stories are about.
schedule December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow...that seriously made me cry. What a sad, but moving song. Great fanfic...wow, I can't believe that made me cry, lol.
schedule December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was really good. It could of had more detail into it cause it was kind of short. But I really did like it!

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