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for Dominance

by BlackMaiden

schedule October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am disappointed that you will no longer be posting your stories here. I was wondering what happened to World Trade Center. I wish you would stay, but I understand. I am unfortunately one of those people who does not review often. If I like a story I will let the author know in a review. I will also say that I will tell a person about spelling and grammar issues too. If I really don't like a story I won't tell the author, because I don't have the same taste in stories. I never thought about reviewing every chapter a person writes. I just did not think an author wanted to hear the same thing from the same person for every chapter. Yes I will contact you on your email to find out how this story ends. Good luck with getting your book published.
person jkbtb
schedule October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit I didn't read much (skimmed mostly) since I am not so much of a fan of Sessh and rin but I think it was written very well. I do thank you though for taking time out and writing something for others to enjoy.
person catcopy
schedule October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am sorry I am not the best reviewer around, I have a tendency to write reviews once in a while. I do rate them if I really like certain chapters. I am sorry you feel the way you do.
schedule October 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh shit, and Serena is in a deep pile of it! No telling what her new psycho mate will do once he finds her. Look forward to the next Chapter!
person LadyMist
schedule September 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Your portrayal of Sesshoumaru is so great. I'm excited for the next chapter.
schedule September 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow this story is definitely an interesting read. I do feel for Seara, her treatment was horrible. But She is dealing with a demon. He warned her. I can see her fleeing in fear. Hell, I just hope she isn't laying somewhere bleeding to death. She really needs something to help with her bleeding. But maybe she ran so he would kill her. Fear makes people do stupid things. Can't wait for the next chapter. That was one wicked cliffie.
schedule September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Thanks! I just wrote it because I was in this weitd mood, at the time, you know...? Thanks for the comment!

SesshysTrueMate1

BTW, my name is Ashley, I'm 18, engaged, and I'm going to collage!
schedule September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great three shot so far, I look forward to an update!!!
person Reymond
schedule August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You give a interesting aspect of youkai dominance in the intercourse and I like it. Glad to read your story. I hope the poor Seara will not be too harshly taken !!
Thank you for your story !

A french mother and reader,
Bonjour de la France

Merely Truth
person brittbritt
schedule August 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this story. I love the fact that its different "no love" is involed and its about time, also i like to see this side of sesshoumaru. I really think you did a good job. And lastly please try not to take so long on updating, a lot of times this makes the reader have to read the story all over again to make sure they remember the story. If you have reader's block try to ask for suggestions maybe that will help. But anyway great story.

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