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Hi,

I think you could write a second story about Seara, Rin, and Sesshoumaura. The story could be about the relationship they have together after being mated. Sesshoumaura killed Seara I can not see their relationship developing into anything health or anything beside master and slave. Seara is complete fearful of Sesshoumaura to the point that he is displease with it. He wants Seara to want him like Rin, but she does not and only obeys him. The main theme could be Sesshoumaura trying to health the torn relationship they have or about how Seara finally kills herself because she does not want to be a slave or treated like a slave for the rest of her very long life.

Niako

thank you so much!! I'm so happy you will be posting dominance finale here!

and I would like it to be Heat because I love sessh...

bye

ty for deciding to continue the story. and my vote is Heat i prefer Sess. stories. and for those who complain that Sess may be to brutal, them should keep in mind that in that era and time men ruled (yes i know he's a demon) and killing there mates (partners) was a favourite past time. we women have it easier , it's wrong to kill us now
oh and for me the Sess/Rin couple not one of my favourites but again understandable for that time period.
ty and keep writing :)

Yep, please repost.

what HAPPENED TO THE LAST CHAPTER?

for me this story was good i would like to see it finnish have a beginning middle and and end this ia adult fan ficiton and all deviance is done here for a reader to complain about subject matter adult child sexual relationships, rape, same sex, group sex, fetishes,beastiality,not that i condone child (underage of 18 a minor)and someone who is older than that to engage in those activities but those things took place back in the day and lords and kings could do those things without being looked down upon slaves were also included in that because they were property and women were included in that as well and it was not til the 20th it stopped eventhough there are certain people have this thing with having sex with children 12-16year old but back then girls as soon as their first monthly cycle started they were married off and had children my grandmother was 13 when she had her first child she was born at the turn of the century my mother was born in 1921 and im for if they have a problem with the story dont read it to me it is a good story and id like to see where it ends

hello!!

please don´t stop posting here!! i love your work you have great writing skills

Dominance is my favorite story I have been following it since the first chapter I absolutly love it!!

wow! you do know how to write lemons and it isn´t just lemon without a reason your descriptions and the reasons why sessh acts like he does are fantastic. I was so anxious to read the continuation such a cliffhanger!! but,I´ve just read your last post and I thik you are right, personally I havent´t review ´cause writing in english is not my forte you see, I´m from Nuevo Leon,Mexico jejeje I understand perfectly the language reading,listening,speaking(with horrible accent)but writing...I have problems with grammar but anyways I hope you´ll still be posting here and if not I´ll be following at your livejournal

good luck!!

bye

Im am definatly sorry to hear that no one reviews your stories and i personaly appoligize as for my self not commenting, I am not the best writter so I never have a good advice[at least thats wat i think] but your fic is really awsome and one of the best dark fics I have read.

so sorry for never even leaving a thank you for being such a talented and awsome author

i realize reviews r important to an author, but to hold a story because of lack of reviews is very something that is in very poor taste. To start a story and not finish show a character fault. i will not be read anymore stories with your name on. and by the way i usually wait until the end of a story to give a review so as not to disturb the flow of what the author wants to write.

dear writer
dont know if its to late...but i just read your story and want you to know i like it so far...and if you get this i would to read the rest....you said you have a live journal is it the same name as blackmaiden...just wanted to say again i really like your story and i would like to read more of your stories your a good writer...
thanxs for you time sarah