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by BlackMaiden

schedule July 29, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Very interesting story. I really felt sorry for Seara. The punishment she received did not fit her crime. I guess from Sesshoumaru pint of view she did bring the death of a lot of demons and human male with her sexualisation attitude. And he did not want her to in the way spoil his Rin I have to say Sesshoumaru was ruthless in his punishment ( I have never read something like that so Chapeau to you). No wonder she run away. It was very foolish of her after what he did and especially told her but she was too scared.To think that she followed him because of his strength and protection and he ended up abusing her in the most horrible ways and killing her. I would love to know is she will be able to forget that her mate did kill. Will she be able to forgive him because he brough her back to life?  I hope you will do a sequel of this fantastic story I would like to know how the relationship between the 3 develop and the dominance. Wil Seara not feel jealous of Rin in a way?  Thanks for this story. I truly enjoyed reading it.    Where is Heat? I have been looking for it but cannot find it at all. I really wish to read it.

schedule July 29, 2017 at 12:00 AM

KagomeLove2: Heat was never written. I wrote this story many years ago and fell off from writing. Keep in touch and hopefully i will write a follow up or finally write Heat. Thank you for the kind words, its good to see that this story still grasps the reader after all these years.

schedule August 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I miss you too! We should email again! :-) I havne't posted much here, but I'm working on it!

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person the witch
schedule December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love it all don't see to many Sesshomaru with two women,its usually the other way around. Thanks for writing this awesome story.
schedule November 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ALright! I hope you get better soon,
person sarah
schedule November 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hey i liked the ending of this story it was well worth the wait for it. i think you did an awesome job finishing the story and thanxs fot that hope you contenuie writing awesome stories.
person Fairqueen
schedule November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ok i promised a review for the last chapter of this story so here we go. i am going to say again that the Sess/Rin is not one of my favourite pairing, but i did enjoy this story. Back in the bad one days women were just what was shown owned by men(or demon in this case) and their treatment was solely up to the head male in their lifes (harsh but true). but what truly impressed me is your ending of this story, i never even thought of that part u need to have someone to show dominance too. Good character development of Sess ,but i wouldn't mind seeing a modern day story from u with the same characters, could be interesting. Looking forward to your next work and remember i tend to review on the last chapter. :)
person fallennagel
schedule November 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awww I´m sad it has finally ended but it was great!
poor seara se really did sufer, tough I didn´t expect the end about the porpouse of dominace and the key to supreme conquest very original...

good work!!

see ya at "heat"

bye
schedule November 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Let me see, where to start. I do wnt to read World Trade Center, I am not sure
other people will not flame you for it, but it was a good story. I think Heat should come first, then the Jewel of four Souls.
I will evenually get on my computer and email you. My phone is where I do
most of my reading.
schedule November 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*Smiles* On which sight...?

SesshysTrueMate1