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December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome as always! U can't go wrong with sexy Inu brothers! B reading U!
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December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i had doubts when i first started this story, but now it is one of my favorites. the self questioning of sesshoumaru has me intrigued, especially in this chapter. the emotional quality of the characters is almost weepy at times, but both are in a pressurized situation, so i find it believable. the translations at the end have helped me grow more comfortable with this story, and i've learned a few things, too. thanks for taking the time and effort to make this a wonderful story so far. i look forward with great anticipation to future chapters.
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December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a lovely story, and I am enjoying it a lot. The problem is the rampant use of Japanese words throughout the piece. I can understand when something has no good translation, but the sheer number of them is making this piece a little hard to read.
Just my two cents worth. Now onto chapter 4 :)
Just my two cents worth. Now onto chapter 4 :)
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December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wah! I'm gonna cry! First from hysterics where Sesshou plays horsie... then in depression because of the whole "pupped!Kagome" and Inuyasha doing the right thing and WAH!! *sobs* I feel Sesshomaru's emotion... the extreme hurt... Thanks so much for all the background information! I absolutely loved it! Just as good as smexing in my opinion!
I look forward to your next chapter!
-DM
I look forward to your next chapter!
-DM
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December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I honestly had to stop reading at one point T_T Because I knew what was going to happen and "at the time" Sesshomaru didn't and oh god... You've got me on freaking pins and needles!! As always, I anxiously look forward to your next chapter!! Great job!
-DM
-DM
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December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww, I just read all four chapters, I had read the two on the comm, but read them again here because you had added and changed this. The last chapter was so sad, poor Inu, poor Sessh, stupid bitch Kagome. Gawd I can't stand her skanky ass. I absolutely love this story, it's diffrerent than many Inucest and it so compellling and interesting. I cant wait until they are finally mated.
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December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I sing your praises! Chapter 2 is awesome! Now on to chapter 3!- B reading U!
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December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! I thought I'd never finish this one! I think this was one of the longest chapters I've ever read! It was wonderful how you encompassed all the elements of Sesshomaru and InuYasha's complicated past family history, with his views on his present life. It was a stroke of genius! Now, onto chapter 4!
BTW- Bakusaiga the name of Sesshomaru's sword, after Tokujin, right?
BTW- Bakusaiga the name of Sesshomaru's sword, after Tokujin, right?
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December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!! Good things do come to those who wait! If I had a tail, I would be wagging it uncontrolably! This was so very HOT, I can't stand it! Just 1 thing, I thought the proper spelling for brother was otouto? Anyway I love those horny Inu demons!!! Keep giving the good stuff! B reading U!
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December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YOU CANT LET HER BE PREGANT