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for Always

by aleabeth

person nchsmi
schedule February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HEY WERE R U? R U IN A COMA OR SOMETHING? COMEBACKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK!!!!!!!!!!!
person nchsmi
schedule January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HEY!!!!!!!!! Where the hell R U? Please update soon, I'm dying 2 read what's instore for InuYasha and Sesshomaru! Come back please!!- B reading U!
person nchsmi
schedule January 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG- U haven't updated in 4ever! Where r u? Since U haven't updated...yet. U better b getting excellent grades! ;P Update soon- B reading U!
person nchsmi
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I do a happy dance whenever see my favorite authors have updated or written new stories. Well, you got that dance today! I so look 4ward 2 reading Always, it's one of the coolest ones on this site. It's right up there with Priness Sin, Izzanami, Demitria Miriam, and other of the like! So awesome! Hey, will InuYasha become pregnant? Seeing that they are both males and the last of the silver dogs. It would be up to them to repopulate their lineage, wouldn't it?

Anyhoo. B reading U!
person nchsmi
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
PS: Rin and Shippo are mad cute! They make a nice addition to the Royal Inu house!
person kunitsu
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow that was just sweet, thier love making had passion that was both hot and sweet. I also loved the words you used, they made the story more intellectual and created a bit of variety. Lovely work
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
IT WAS GOOD!!!! You know it has to come to an end, but you don't want it to. After everything that he has been through you want the both of them to have a family. There was something that I had been thinking about every since you brought up Kagome being "pg", who would have taken care of the child? Would the child have survived long enough to have been born should be the first question. Would Sess take the child in if Inu had asked? Would it have been loved by either but for the mere fact that it was half of Inu? These were the kinds of questions that was floating around in my mind almost since I started reading the fic. Had me checking every day for an update. I hope you do decide to continue in a series with this. You are one of the few authors I have come across to keep me interested from beginning to end with your storyline. Keep it up.
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That...was friggin beautiful...each and every moment. When he left Sango and Miroku it was sweet and funny and heartbreaking. And when they were all with Shippou and RIn it was so cute and gave a sense of family and actually lol I think Sesshoumaru is really rubbing off on Shippou he's so polite and well mannered now...uh oh Inu better watch out lol. And then the sex...i think i need a fan i mean DAMN!!! 5 stars, A++++, two thumbs way way up, all that good stuff!!! Job well done XD
schedule January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very beautifully written story, I felt tears in quite few paragraphs of it. I am stunned by your choice of evil Kagome wrought on poor Inuyasha, very unique and original.
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yep, I've got it in the bag now. lol I will be sad to see the story end, but I'm glad you're continuing it in drabbles. I cannot wait for the next chapter. ^-^