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Never heard the song before, but I definitely like it now. Very sweet fanfiction--Great job. I feel it was KINDA rushed at the end and I was a little confused, but other than that, it was really good! (PS: LOVE the childrens' names!!!!)

oh, wow! your first-ever songfic! and i'm JUST NOW reading it?? what gives? lol, anyways, I like it. I think you rushed it a bit there at the end, when you went skipping to the present, but hey, it's really great for a first try!

You scared me there toward the end, after it hit InuYasha that he was alone. Since you never had him feel the tug after that, it surprised me when you were in the present again, but I was relieved! Whew! This was very sweet. Great job!