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This story has piqued my curiosity. I rather like it.

oooo, never saw this pairing before. But it seems really interesting. XD Looking forward to reading more!

a very interesting couple indeed, though with both from the canine family, why not? the only problem for their future i see is where they´ll be living once they got together. either inu will have to join kouga´s pack, hence accepting him as leader(!!) - which i can´t see happening in a million years - or ginta will have to leave his pack to live with inu, which would be pretty hard for him....but for your one true love....and if you throw in mpregs, they could start their own pack
btw, ginta was the one with the dark hair and hakaku the one with the iro, right? since kouga usually calls them simultaneously i have problems to tell who is who *blushes embarrassed*

I love the idea of this; the beta wolves are so rarely used and I'm suddenly struck by the possibility of it. Definitely needs a second chapter one of these days :)

I gotta give you props for originality. It's really nice to see something new and different. Who says Inuyasha can't end up with someone other than the common choices? The chapter's a bit too short to make a real commentary on the actual writing but so far everything seem grammatically correct and all. Keep it up. I hope to see more of this soon. ^^

Definitely a rare pairing but it's a great start! I'll be watching for more to this!

I love when you write unusual pairings. The everyday pairing gets so boring after a while. I can't wait to see where this leads.