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It's bad that he's chasing after her, but it would be so much better for him to catch her begging Inu's forgiveness or something! He needs to be slapped down and so does she. I think she is coming across as sluttish, but that's the way you've designed her character in this, it would be hard to change it now and I don't have a problem with it. I can say one thing though about oocness. I think it is a stretch to have Inu ready to forgive and forget after she bangs Kouga, I mean he put up with a lot from Kikyo but she never bent over for anyone else so to speak. I don't think he'd just let this go, and Kouga is in my opinion in character. He has insulted Inu for being a halfbreed before, and he loves to torment him, the only real stretch I see are Kags being so easy and Inu letting her crap go. I have a question, is this going to be total angst from beginning to end, because I don't think I can take that?!

Vashta

i think your explanation for ginta´s submission to inu as well to his generally 'weakness' is very believable, plus i´m intrigued that kouga´s order to forget about inu seems to awake his last shred of dominance...maybe he´s gonna surprise his alpha. moreover, i don´t think that kouga should give himself airs, as inu is without any doubt stronger than him and could kill him anytime he wanted, as he has just proven. i bet kouga´s ego is hurt as bad as his leg by this ;-) besides, if kouga really wants to mate kagome, that would made his kids hanyou´s too, right? or maybe kagome is merely a plaything to him, something he thinks he can anger inu with now that he´s got her....and i would love to see her enraged reaction once she realises this!! also, i think besides his stupid prejudices against hanyous in general kouga is afraid of bringing inu in the family because he knows very well that inu is stronger, and thus would endanger his position as the alpha of the pack.
btw, i love inu´s protective side towards ginta, i think the others weakness/submissiveness allows his youkai kind of to ignore that he´s male and see him as a mate he has to protect....speaking of youkai-instincts, i wouldn´t be surprised if inu´s feelings for kagome would fade drastically once she smells like kouga all over, or at the latest when she get´s pregnant.

aww...so sweet! and hot ;-) i like that you made kagome a slut while ginta was - at least emotionally - a virgin. ok, so the big love declaration was a bit too early, but people tend to get sappy after having sex LOLOL and they definitely do care about each other a great deal, and inu trusts ginta, seeing how relaxed he was around him during his vulnerable time. kudos for pointing out him being torn between human emotions and demonic instincts, i´m already curious how he´ll react towards ginta once he´s hanyou again. nevertheless, the road ahead may be bumpy, but i´m confident that they´ll make it!
p.s. why doesn´t ginta have the dominance/submission problem with the situation like inu? i mean, he even submitted to him in his human form(!) without his youkai complaining whereas the mere though of submitting to fullblooded ginta drives inu´s halblood youkai up the wall.

thanks for finally updating update soon.

I like this so far, but please, please, please, let Kagome get what's coming to her, and Kouga too! I can't stand her even in the manga, she drives me crazy!

I am happy to see an uncommon pairing and I like how this one is going. I always found Kouga's two friends to be saints for putting up wiht the horn dog's actions at trying to woo the bitch (lord I hate Kagome for hte most part even if she did kinda redeem herself at the end of the series). Ginta is sweet in his own way and inuyasha, well you're really sticking to their personalities whihc isn't very often in yaoi fics. I really want to read more so update or I shall be very cross! :D Still this is great so I'm gonna be here to the end, k? Laterz!

Another interesting chapter. Inu is feeling guilty and confused. Ahh the angst. I'm pleased that you highlighting Kagome's fault in dealing with the Kouga situation.

inu´s 'logic' is just hilarious - if she doesn´t want me, i´m simply moving on to the one who does, even if i have no feelings or whatsoever for him....though i think inu´s already starting to feel something for ginta, with how much he thinks of him...and the sex thing...i think that the picture of a proudly erect ginta didn´t pleased him might be some demonic dominance issue, since he had no problem with ginta 'serving' him with his mouth. i bet the picture of ginta down on his knees would surely appeal to him ;-)

i really like it so far i can't wait for the next update

great update! poor ginta, so confused about those evil dreams LOL and now he has to face inu again - hopefully no one notices his blush ;-)