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Oh Dear.
I hope to see the next chapter hun!!

Awwww sooo sad

Please hurry with the next chapter!!

Is this on fanficion.net as well?

more more more, please!!!

*gasp!* damn, i hope the next update will come VERY soon - though i can almost picture what comes next: inu turning fully youkai, since he has lost tessaiga and clearly is in a life-threatening situation. that way he should be strong enough to deal with those damn beasties, the big question however is how will youkai-inuyasha react to ginta...or poor ginta when he sees his lover in this state. apropos ginta: although he starts diverging from your original characterization i like his slowly surfacing/rebuilding self-confidence. the way you write it - intentional or not - its believable that ginta actually isn´t the totally weak wimp as everyone, including himself, believes him to be, his self-perception is just totally warped due to the earlier abuse which also (nearly) destroyed his self-confidence. but now, due to inu´s love and acceptance his sense of self-worth is rising rapidly...which leads me to the question how kouga and also hakakku must have treated him all these years to not have caused the same effect - maybe not violently and abusive, but obviously they didn´t supported him like true friends should have either. just remember how easily BOTH demanded that he gives up his love...
*phew!* somehow i spent more time typing my review that reading the chapter LOL but i can´t help it, your story kind of inspires me to write extensive comments ;-)

I would have to disagree with you about how Ginta is I really like his character. I think that it brings more conflict to Inuyasha's mind on how he treats him as a potential mate. Because with Ginta acting very submissive I think that it is making Inuyasha more protective and whether he likes it or not. I hope that he falls in love with Ginta. I really like your story and I wouldn't change a thing. Can't wait for the next chapters.

Great story for such an unusual pairing. I never would have thought of those two together but the way you have it, it really works.

This was a great chap, but I hate the cliffy, but that's what makes it good enough to keep coming back! I'm glad you liked my idea, and I like that Inu is all protective of Ginta. I can't wait for the next update.

Vashta

O.O What is it with people and evil, evil cliff hangers!!!! NO!!!! please update soon! this is going to be killing me!

*does a happy dance* A Update!!! woot! I love this story! I like that you had Inuyasha considering Ginta's feelings when it came to actually killing Kouga... I just feel bad for poor Ginta. hopefully Inuyasha will make him feel better, ne?

I like this story. And a thought on your author notes about their personalities: I think you are right on target because you have to figure that Inu yasha would be like that if he was sleeping with Kagome and if Kagome was that easy then her personality fits. Kouga would most likely be an ass because he is very protective of his pack. And Inuyasha would have conflict if he so much time and "love" invested with Kagome, so I really like the conflict in his heart. Thank you for a very good story. And I look forward to another chapter.