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November 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please writte more chapters
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December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon... I found I really like this story... UPDATE PLZ... and I wonder what will happen when Inuyasha finds out about this....
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December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hurrah for longer chapters! I totally dig where this is going. The only thing I feel like mentioning (and totally constructive, promise) is that more visual/spatial discription would really flesh it out. But I'm already hooked, so do what you will. Me likey.
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December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hahahaha!!!! thats freakin beautiful!!!!!!
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December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AHA! I just love the way you left that chap 4 with a bit of humour at the end of the chapter...made my night as I was reading and you didn't need to say what made her shocked...it was totally obvious and that means you do well with your writing..If I can read between the lines of the story, then your descriptions are really well done... I can't wait to see what else you are going to put into the next chapter.. and I am also glad to see that the chapters are getting longer... happy writings ^^"
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December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Why did you leave me hanging? The story was getting good! Please write more!
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December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
real good hope to read more of this soon
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December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice story and looks promising. Hopefully you can get it finished for Christmas. :-) I guess Sess will have at least partial amnesia for a while based on the memory comments. Is he still Inuyasha's half brother? If so, I guess they don't get along well if Kagome doesn't know who he is after being married to Inu for 10 years!
Thanks!
Thanks!
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December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
cool story. it's funny, intersting and sort of dramatic like. i like the end of chapter 4 hope you update soon