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January 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Will you be continuing this story... it is really good. and true my grandmother was married to my grandfather when she was 12 although i think it would be beneficial for my psychological well being if i did not know what they did together...ewwww
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January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This sort of thing is so hard to write. Historical context versus modern sensibilities - that's a tricky balance. It's a brave experiment. One thing, though. Watch out for the tense shift in the second chapter. You start out in past and switch to present. You should keep it consistent.
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December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY LOLI RIN *_* We need more loli Rin that aren't abuse fics!
It was really cute and sweet! Nice work!
It was really cute and sweet! Nice work!
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December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting beginning, though it does leave the reader wanting more. GIVE US MORE! /b/ commnds it!
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December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was cute... a little strange for me since I don't normally read these types of fics, but cute. ^,^
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November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooooh thats so cute!!!! you must make more chapters!!!
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November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this. It was very sweet. As I said I love the way you write Loli. You do it in a sweet, tender way that really makes me enjoy this pairing. I love Rin in her innocence and as a little girl who knows what she wants.
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November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sweet
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November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thats was soo sweeet =]
I loved it. And even though it was only kissing,
i really liked it. Adorable. (:
I loved it. And even though it was only kissing,
i really liked it. Adorable. (:
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November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I thought this was cute . . . I like it. Please keep it going!