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December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! When I was reading Twilight, i saw Inuyasha and Kagome in the place for Bella and Edward quite often. It's really cool that your doing this little crossover type fic. I think you're doing a fantastic job, and I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED this movie! And you're writing about it! (screams) Yea! It's awesome so far! Keep goin!
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December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The story looks interesting, though I know nothing about Twilight.
I have one small constructive criticism based on the first chapter, and I admit it's really nitpicky, but I hope you'll use it to make your story even better:
Kagome going by airplane from Tokyo to Kyoto: First of all, there is no airport in Kyoto; the closest one is in Osaka (but most people don't know that, so don't worry about it). Also, most of the time using the shinkansen (bullet train) is cheaper, and only takes about three hours from Tokyo station if you take the HIKARI shinkansen.
I have one small constructive criticism based on the first chapter, and I admit it's really nitpicky, but I hope you'll use it to make your story even better:
Kagome going by airplane from Tokyo to Kyoto: First of all, there is no airport in Kyoto; the closest one is in Osaka (but most people don't know that, so don't worry about it). Also, most of the time using the shinkansen (bullet train) is cheaper, and only takes about three hours from Tokyo station if you take the HIKARI shinkansen.
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November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yup i'm gonna like this. thanks for updating. i like how the story's going.
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November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, well I am enjoying this. As I was reading Stephine Meyer's books I also found some strange similarities between Inuyasha and Twilight. A vampire or demon who loved the scent of a human girl. Oh and I love the role you have planned for Koga. That's perfect! Keep writing.
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November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow - so InuYasha is making the first move to be friends...or more? It's interesting to see Miroku so uptight...I guess it's natural to be protective/suspicious/whatever when they supposedly only interact with each other. This was a great update - I can't wait for the next! And I'm glad everything with Harmony is okay now - hopefully no more problems!
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November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
is this going to exactly the same as twilight? and omg.. i felt bad for the guy who was chasing after bella in the beginning! ahah. did you see the movie yet?
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November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this. I've just read the Twilight series and you putting it together with Inuyasha is the best! please update soon, thank you! I will continue reading as much as a can.
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November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the very solemn, first person mood that you have created. It appears to be very straight forward, shifting from one event to the next. I hope to see more chapters soon.
I hope your sister feels better. I know what it is like to feel icky from being pregnant all the time. I was sick when I was pregnant with my son, David, all though the pregnancy and even through delivery. SUCKS BIG TIME!!! LOL
I am definitely going to have to read Twilight soon. It is still sitting on my bookshelf because I just haven't had a moment to read other than school stuff.
I hope your sister feels better. I know what it is like to feel icky from being pregnant all the time. I was sick when I was pregnant with my son, David, all though the pregnancy and even through delivery. SUCKS BIG TIME!!! LOL
I am definitely going to have to read Twilight soon. It is still sitting on my bookshelf because I just haven't had a moment to read other than school stuff.
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November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love the lastest chapter please keep going its really great