rate_review Reviews

To bad you stopped it was good and not to much like twilight it went well

I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY IT IS COOL HOW YOU PUT IT IN INUYASHA STORY FORM "LOL" CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE FROM YOU SOON!!!!

WEELL. i went to watch the movies. it wasn't bad .. nor was it really good. if you didn't read the book, it would've been horrible. but my god, is edward sexy. his family too. ahah, well. i like how this is going, update soon!

This story is amazing! I was away for a little while and when I came back there was Claimed. I'm not, however, familiar with the plot or characters of Twilight, as I haven't read the books yet. But this story is intriguing to say the least. Once I finish 1984, that will be the next book on my list.

Oh, and the 'sneak peaks' are a nice touch. They keep me yearning for more. I can't wait for the next chapter, and their first kiss.

**Sorry for the double post but I am typing on my iPhone and it tends to substitue words.

okay so i read all the twilight books and at first i thought "hey this is REALLY like inuyasha in a way"

then i find this story and WOW i LOVE it....

UPDATE!

Hi ya. Ah! The infamous van scene where Kagome/Bella is saved by a man with supernatural strength and speed. Hee hee! Now is Inuyasha driving a silver volvo as well? Does he have a thing for driving over the speed limit? Thanks for another great chapter. You are right that the movie isn't nearly as good as the books. But it's not bad. My sister read the books and loved the movie. Personally I think the movie was a little confusing if you hadn't read the books first (especially the beginning sequence). But since I had read the books, I found it entertaining. Not bad, not good, just somewhere in between. Edward was cute on screen and the scenes of the Pacific Northwest were breathtaking. So it was worth my $7.

Now after you have read all four Twilight books you have to check out something online. Go to Stephenie Meyer’s official website so that you can download ‘Midnight Sun’ a free, unfinished re-telling of ‘Twilight’ from Edward’s perspective. It is an absolutely awesome read and it should help you with writing your chapters since you get to see everything from Edward's perspective (including Alice's prediction that he was going to fall in love with Bella and how he fought it tooth and nail). Great stuff.

I'm glad that you read Silly Human Mating Rituals. It was my first fan fict. It had heart, but it wasn't very polished. My current story 'A Grudging Loss' (which is an AU set in modern times) started with one beta and now has three betas. It's really polished, better written and I think it shines more than anything else I've done.

Keep writing!

I loved that bit about the mockery of Koga and them were allegedly supposed to be werewolves. That was good. I intend to read the series... now I just have to get ahold of a copy. LOL I hope your sister is feeling better. Take care and update soon. Happy holidays.

I just reread my review and realized I had left half of a sentence off. LOL I meant that I was going to have to get a copy of the whole series. If only I was heading towards work soon...

Woot! I was wondering when you were going to update! :) This was a great chapter - maybe a tiny rushed at some points, but all around very good. And things are progressing nicely! *wipes hands together evilly* I love it! And oooohhhh...we get a kiss in the next chapter! SQUEEE!!! I can't wait! Oh, and no, I haven't read the series. I'll have to add it to my list! Can't wait for the next update!

You're writing a fanfiction based on a horribly bad and unoriginal series for whiney teenage girls. Yeah, I don't have to say more.

One Star.

Be original.