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for I Will Have You

by Dante1444

person acr1228
schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like the start of this fic. However, it seems a bit too easy so far. I mean, it seems like Inuyasha sleeping around Kouga when he's human should be a result of him trusting Kouga, not of Kouga saying, "Do this so you'll learn to trust me." Like, maybe Inuyasha was really hurt and just passed out and woke up and Kouga was there, or maybe Kouga does other stuff and eventually Inuyasha trusts him enough to go to sleep.
person Anon
schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really like the promise of this beginning. the persona that kouga projects to the others brings to mind a wolf in sheep's clothing. i can't wait to see what he has planned.
schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is so sweet, and sexy!!! Please update soon, I definetely want to read more!!!