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by Dante1444

person Luma
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm finding this story endlessly amusing, and honestly can not wait for more.
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol, no kidding. happens to me all the time. I'm certain many of my reviewers are upset with me. I get into a good rhythm on one story and then end up writing on another and loosing my previous thought process. anyway, loved the chapter as always, hope to see more!
person Vyper
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I honestly think Inuyasha doesn't want to be dominated. Sesshoumaru is an ass sometimes, but in truth as ruler of the Inu's and Inuyasha's elder brother he should have full say so over everything and tell Inuyasha the TRUTH. He trains him even when people don't notice, protects Inuyasha, and it is kind of frustraiting that he doesn't suddenly show up and make Kouga pay.
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH i CAN'T WAIT PLEASE UPDATE SOON! THANK YOU.
person a random ff.net authoress, m.t.h.
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... If this is what you get with a little of both, a lot of both... Wow. I like how Ginta, Hakkaku, and Inuyasha are getting closer. I think it's really cute. And Kouga is totally determined about making Inuyasha submit, even if he has to use his friends and authority to finally have him. It would really suck for this to blow up in his face. Great job, can't wait for more!
person mcdgoddess
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. Thanks for the explaining the whole uke/submissive difference. I'm glad that Inuyasha is finally getting that sense of family, but I'm kind of looking forward to when the truth is revealed about whats really going on and why. Will Sesshoumaru appear again? I don't know, but his appearance did seem kind of random in Ch. 3, but hey he helped to complete their mission and speed up this ever growing/changing relationship between Koga and Inuyasha.
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This update is awesome, I can't wait to read more!!! I like the way you have Kouga as being calculating, though having a growing attraction towards Inuyasha; it's very deep.
person Ireyon
schedule November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That's a very good story, well-written KougaxInuyasha fics are rather rare, I'm glad i found this! And that's a intriguing storyline you have there, please keep going. I just doubt that Kouga's pack would be happy if they found out, and Kagome&Co would probably rip Kouga to pieces if they even do so much as to suspect something.

I'll definitely continue reading (& reviewing).
schedule November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well its only chapter 3 and im ready to bow down and warship u lol. U write these guys so well, its just a treat to read. and I have the opposite problem as u do, I just cant c inuyasha as a seme no matter how hard i try XP lol.In my mind hes the perfect uke. And i love how sneaky Kouga is here :) Well I hope 2 c an update 4 this great story soon!
person dino1
schedule November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aS per my last review I always thought that his pack mates were smarter then Kouga thought they portrayed. If old Sess shows up allof Kouga plans may go out will go out the window, and he better be able to speak fast because Sess may beat him up.