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Wow, this wasn't the ending I was expecting, but hey at least I got an ending. I agree with you about authors not finishing their stories. There are some other great stories on this site that haven't been updated in years. I'm definitely going to check out your other stories now.

I really like what I've read so far. I can't wait for the next chapter.

I think it would be amusing for Inuyasha to find a female in the tribe and be doing things with her while Kouga is keeping himself warm at night. A little jealousy goes a long way. I personnally disagree with you on the being in charge thing. I have been married for 17 years. My husband is an 'in charge' kind of guy and most men I know even what one might consider a beta likes being in control all the time. It is important to them and I honestly think Kouga should get a bit of crap for tricking Inuyasha plus I think Sesshoumaru needs to come back even for a moment after getting sick of hearing of Inuyasha to challenge Kouga for Inuyasha. Just my two cents. I honestly think that Kouga's way of trying to give Inuyasha the world only to take it all away is fucked up. He cannot take over Inuyasha's legacy when Inuyasha earned it through blood sweat and tears. That is even more wrong than forcing him to be his mate.

Thanks for the update! Koga is a cunning little bastard.

Sweet. I can't wait to see what you have planned for Kouga and Inuyasha. I'm kinda feeling sorry for Inuyasha, though. Everyone around him is mating or in love like Hakkaku and Ginta and then he sees Kouga taking a seme back to his caves for trial sex... That has to be rough. :( But all in all I think it was a cute and informative little chappie! ^_^

Most definitely. It's a little fast paced for my tastes, but still quite enjoyable to read. I look forward to the next update. x3

ooooooo, lovely lovely. absolutely loving the chapter. What do you mean you're close to finishing!? Really?! *sniffles* Well, I shall be sad to see it ended, but hopefully we'll see you back with some more writing? well, I'll keep hoping. ^^

I just noticed that I love those "playtimes" of those four, I just feel sad for Inuyasha. Even though he's strong he isn't exactly smart, I doubt that he'll ever notice what Kouga is doing to him (not that this would be a bad thing). Oh well, at least Kouga will have to take care of Inuyasha once he enters his pack.

Though Inuyasha is enjoying himself,I still wonder when the demon part of him is going to question this.Or
are the other 2 wolfs going to figure this out and stop it but to late.This is a good story yet I'm still
having some trouble wrapping my head around it and Inu submitting so easilly

The story is really good, but it makes me sad that Koga doesn't really love Inu
i was hoping that his pride as an alpha was masking his true feelings of love and desire for Inuyasha, or that Sesshomaru would at least be like "He is using you."
Maybe Inu should find out what is really going on and disappear and Ginta and Hakkaku get really mad at Koga and refuse to speak to him.
then maybe a happy ending????
just a thought..

Your Stories are great, Keep on Writing!!