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for The Puppet Master

by BondageFetish

person padme101
schedule October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love your story cant wait to read more so plz update soon!!!!!!!!
schedule September 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love your fic,
I read long ago
but now and again by the forum
and seen as not put more chapters,
not going to continue?
person kittyblue
schedule January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOVE the story, very much in fact, one of the better ones I've come across in a while. But I'm afraid I'm going to have to threaten you with sporks if you don't update soon!
person legilmyth
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WEll that was a very good way to deal with the situation. I am interested to see what else you have the Dragon do now that he is bonded with Kagome.
Keep up the good work.

Legilmyth
schedule December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww I love how sweet you're making Yusuke, and yes he's checking her out:) I love how you're handling the dragon and Kagome, so freaking sweet. And I do very much enjoy that Kagome knows Hiei's thoughts, such a nice change! I'm quite enjoying this story. I hope that Kagome will beable to speak with her family so that they can be rencarnated.
person ness
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This has been a really really great story... It was very orginal and well thought out... Its there going to be a sequel.. I surely hope so....
schedule December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy this story very much. The shift in character's perspective is great and flows well. This is a wonderful read and I would love to see more of your work posted here instead of LJ so you can see the counter go up with each time that I read it.
schedule November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is absolutely amazing! Brilliantly written and well thought out. I love the characters, especially Kagome's family. Enjoyed reading all 3 chapters, and looking forward to more :) Thanks for posting this.
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a unique take for this particular crossover! I must admit that I was disappointed to see that you haven't written anything else on this site, so that I would have something else to read while I wait for this story to be updated.;)
person madmiko
schedule November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I had the pleasure of reading this on The Deadliest Sin community's board for their contest--it definitely deserved the win it was awarded. I was so intrigued by Kagome's plight and the way you brought her into contact with Hiei. You really made the two worlds work together. And I loved the way she was able to read/control Hiei's mind--it made such a fun change from HIM doing it to her. ^_^

I was absolutely bowled over by the way you used the dragon in this. I have never seen anyone give the dragon a personality like that before. Its feelings towards Hiei made perfect sense to me. And the deal it struck with Kagome was awesome! Your title was perfect: the question was WHO was the true puppet master? Heh heh!

This was fabulous and sexy and a real treat! I hope to see more Hiei/Kagome love from you in the future.

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