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for A Grudging Loss

by osherry

schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I finally had a chance to catch up on this story. (One of those weeks. LOL) Yup, I would definitely say that it was fast enough, especially considering that you had two updates out before I could even check.

Take care. I hope I see another update or two soon.
schedule November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
rotflmao! It's so funny Ayame can't sing, even though she's a wolf! What really gets me is the whole concept of the game you have going. Totally badass! And as for chapter eight, great post! I loved the double date. Miroku...such a letch. PS: Great job writing the kiss scene with Inu/Kag in detail. It was really good! Anyway, looking forward to the next update! <3
schedule November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh. That was so good!!! Update soon. Seriously... Now, please...
schedule November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOVE it so far and I'm only on chapter three!!!
schedule November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, now that I have actually read all six chappies, I just wanted to say I think this story is very AMAZING. I love the cultural location and GOD, I know what you mean about the rivalries and pressure to do your best and everything. I am seriously looking forward to the next chapters! Keep up the good work!!!!

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