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for A Grudging Loss

by osherry

person Alpine02
schedule January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
he he he (giggling madly)
I just get so excited to see this story , I can't tell you... Ok you asked for a song.. I am not really thinking it will fit too much but it popped up across my iPod and I thought of this song...

This Love Maroon 5
I don't think it goes with their band vibe but thought I would throw it out there. Or possibly,
Broken Seether
but that's not too high energy.

Can't wait to see more and as always... Your HAPPY fangirl
Alpine
person Alpine02
schedule January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really think that with the way the story is progressing, you have more than a great jump on getting Inu's head dislodged from his ass.. so to speak.. Thanks for the heads up and I can't wait to see what happens next, as always.

Your "fangirl"...
schedule January 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*slaps palm against forehead* OH DUH! MUSO!!!! That's who she was fighting! I'm like WTF?! Who is that?! Lol, anyway, great chapter and my God...I got the biggest chills from reading about the roofies. As someone who has had one slipped into her drink, I can remember the horror of that, definitely. (Fortunately nothing happened, but I can account that to the bartender who helped me out of that jam BIG time). And I love how you used real-life events to portrait Inuyasha's life and how his mother died. 1992...? I was about three, I believe, but I VAGUELY remember someone talking about those types of things. Like, for real. Anyway, great chapter and I'm looking forward to another! I think it's about time this story got an IYFG nomination! I'll nominate you!
person Alpine02
schedule January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just back from vacation for 2 days and already got to see a new chappy... (jumps up and down like a child)

I totally understand that you needed to give a little more "depth" to Inu's character... I think it works really well for this story and the plot is just great.

I was sooo happy to come home to this, thanks so much.. And maybe a lobotomy would help to ease the pressure... or maybe more chappy's????.... LOL

Thanks again and look forward to more...
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sorry it took me so long to review...!

This story just keeps getting better and better and OMG, Sess and Myouga can come up with some pretty sadistic plans. I'd go hell for leather if some guy ran out on the field and held up my panties, just to embarrass me. That boy wouldn't live long enough to regret it!!!! OMG! But this story has me hooked--Great job so far! Looking forward to an update!
schedule January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Irony... so much fun. Cool. I will be waiting for the email. Loved the update. He got freaked out because she said his "alter ego's" name in her sleep. I loved that. I was laughing really hard. I can't wait until they compete each other again. It is going to be a blow out.

I am seeing it now:

Kagome will figure out that Ash and Inu Yasha are one in the same after the big blow out between Miroku and actress chick with baby that ends with some serious drama between Miroku and Sango. Ouch! Fun too!!

I have gotta finish up my chapter three. I had it going and then couldn't finish it b/c of distractions. Oh well, it should be done very, very soon. Take care.
person Alpine02
schedule December 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Arigato nii-san.... Soooo happy to see another chapter... Going on vactation so maybe when I get back in two weeks, I get to see another chappie.... pretty please with sugar on top? And maybe some chocalate sprinkles.. Ok.. I won't beg anymore.. thanks for the chapter...
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoops. If I said the manga, I meant the anime. I knew the manga had finished b/c my students were texting me and fussing. They were happy with the ending somewhat, but they were just not ready for it to be over. I had quite a nice size group that loved anime and were grinning from ear to ear when they found out I read some mangas and watched lots of anime. LOL It was so funny. (Yeah, I obviously teach highschoolers and am committed in one sense or the other...)

To me, the anime held its own flavor that was not in the manga, but the manga was also open to more interpretations. I was so happy when it ended with Inu/Kag forever!!! I whooted for a while. My hubby laughed at me. He thought it was cute for some reason. I just hated how the anime just sort of quit.

Loved the update. It was interesting to watch the interaction. Cheating on the person you are dating WITH the person you are dating. What a funny possibility. The fireworks are going to be huge...

I updated today as well. (Yay!!! I finally got fingers to keys and got it done. Thankfully, as a lot of people my age and younger, I type a whole lot faster than I write.)
schedule December 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey. Loved your ideas, but with Christmas and finals around, my time for play was nonexsistant. LOL (I have started on the update now. Yay!!!) Great update. Inu Yasha had to feel slapped in the face during that little discussion with Miroku.

Til next time, take care!
person Alpine02
schedule December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes.... A fangirl.. he he

I look forward to to process of watching Inu get his come up-ins.. Thanks for updating so quickly, I really needed a reprieve from the holiday hum drums...