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for A Grudging Loss

by osherry

schedule March 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I SO TOTALLY LOVE YOU NOW!!! YOPU PUT SUPER SMASH BROTHERS IN THERE!!! X3 *SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEE* Omg, my bf is the BIGGEST SSM freak, omg...! He plays it nonstop, lol! (Ike is SUCH a hottie...EEEEE) Forgive my fangirldom!!!! AND YES, HHNF will be having a lemon soon!!! Everyone is SO antsy for that scene!!! OMG!!!!

But about this latest chapter, OMG, it made me GRIN so much! I was so freaking happy! Damn paparazzi. Yarg...they honestly, honestly drive me insane. But I'm so glad there aren't anymore secrets...! Um...wait...did Inuyasha ever let Kagome know about his deception plot...? Oh, right, right! He did! He did! ADURG...But this story is seriously made of 1000% awesomeness and so are you! great job!!! (Now if I could just get to updating both of my stories and making Inuyasha less assholish...in one of them...)

PS: You have GOTTA love Happosai! What a loveable perv! ~^-^~
person socalgal
schedule March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is pretty good. I like the different setting.
schedule March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update. That was a good lemon. I've been reading Twilight while my students are taking their third mock test. It is a really good book. (I can't help it. I'm bored to tears at work. I've graded everything, filed everything, wrote lesson plans for the next month... I bet you have the picture. I even spun around in my chair until I was dizzy. LOL The things one will do when completely bored. I have three more days of this... Maybe I should take my laptop to work with me... Hmmm... Though there.)

Anyway, update soon.
person Alpine02
schedule March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ohayo AiKisugi-sama!!! Thanks for updating so quick. It was great, as usual. I don't ever think I could be disappointed by this story. I found a song that really seemed to fit when I was reading this one, called Lucky by Jason Mrax(Featuring Colbie Caillat) You should check it out. It's really fluffy but I thought it fit what Inu was going through for most of the story.

I am writing and au fic for Inu/Kag. I have like 6 chappy's done and I have a girlfriend reading them. It's kind of weird though since she is not familiar with the characters. Maybe I should try to find a beta? I should be posting it in the next 2 or 3 weeks. Depends on how I feel it's going.

Can't wait to see more on this one and thanks again hon!
Your's Truly
Alpine *-)
person Alpine02
schedule March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Forgot to mention... I am a Twilight fan too and have read the books a few times, I agree with you on the movie and I can't wait to see how they try to pull off the 2nd book as a movie. The last movie should be awesome though, as long as they get a bit of a better budget for special effects. I am halfway through the Midnight Sun and it makes a lot of things a lot clearer coming from Edwards pov... I think that series could have been even better with a little lemony goodnes??? lol
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
#1: You didn’t seriously think that I was going to let my characters have sex and not talk about birth control, did you?

You are INCREDIBLY wise AND smart, lol! I know bc is the LAST thing on people's mind when they write a fanfic, but it does as a sense of realism! And I know what you mean by "I didn't mean to write the lemon, it just sort of happen" rotflmao! I laughed SO hard! Keep up the great work, hon!!!! Very good job and I'm glad you like HHNF! (Now, the horrible inu in TYFH? Oh, trust me, this next chapter that gets posted--is so dedicated to you, lol!)
person Alpine02
schedule February 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Arigato!!!! ARIGATO Ai Kisugi-chan!! You thought I was happy before... Well you should now know that I am at the pinnacle of my bliss now that you have put forth the lemon....(Deep Bow) You truly are my favorite writer right now. I am obviously not your beta but I would agree that it really did need to be kind of fluffy for the 1st lemon, it makes for the best possible solution after such a situation. I am really hoping you will be adding something a little bit more 'dominent' for the other lemon. I think that would add something kind of spicy to the fluff that I have just experienced. As always, I check every few days for your updates and I always look forward to them. I am actually writing a story of my own because you have inspired me. I haven't written in 15 years so that is saying a lot.
Hugs and as always, can't wait to see more
Your fangirl
Alpine
^_^
schedule February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! That was good a lemon. I neary burst a gut at Koga though. Oh, that's why you threw the game. I think that Inu Yasha would so get him for that... if he wasn't already occupied.
You made my night with that update. Thanks.
schedule February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*HUGGLES YOU MASSIVELY*

OMG!!!! WHAT A WONDERFUL CHAPTER!!!!! OMG! I WAS SO HAPPY!!!!!! YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW HAPPY THIS CHAPTER HAS MADE ME!!!! And seriously, I am SO happy that last chapter made me cry! I tear up just thinking about it! Seriously, this chapter has just...blown me away. I like the line about Kagome saying "MEN!" like it was a cuss, lol. And then Kouga's cameo was amusing, lol. Anyways, great job as usual!!! Much, much, MUCH love!!!
person Alpine02
schedule February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh Yeah BABY!!!! Whoot Whoot... (does Arsenio hand gesture)

I loved how it worked out, great job btw... You know, being any rational reader of these fics, I love lemon more than anything... Yes I love the angst but the lemon is why I read...

Have I told you lately how much I love this story??? I don't think I have... I love this story.. There I said it... Now please proceed to the wonderfully naughty lemon.. Cant wait to see it
Hugs
Alpine