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May 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Where have I been since you started posting this!? Damn school and the Fates *shakes fist at the sky*! What a great story! I love, Love, LOVED it! I just spent the last day or two reading from start to finish. ((Semester's over, I can do that now lol)) It flowed really well. And I would hope it would considering all of your great betas. I must admit, I was slightly jealous when I kept reading who all was helping you out. ;)
The characters cracked me up. I was lmao when Kouga walked in, saw them in bed, leered and said "So if I throw a game... Will you sleep with me?...?..." Yeah that was great, lol. I felt that it was a bit odd that Miroku and Sango weren't as involved in the story as I'm used to, but oh well. The story was fine without it. Everything else was great. I guess as an avid Inuyasha fan, I get really into these stories, lol *grins sheepishly*. Who doesn't though!? Let's face it, we're all here for the same reason! To get some Inu-lovin'! He was so cute n hott! I wish I could tweak his cute lil ears (and then some, BUT that's entirely besides the point)!
I just loved the emotions and chemistry you put between Inu and Kag. The addicting kisses and then FINALLY the great lemons... I absolutely loved it in the last chap when he was talking to his mom. You did a fabulous job with that part, the whole story rocked, but that particular moment REALLY tugged on my heart strings. I think that part really applies to everything Inuyasha. I'm glad to see I'm not the only one who has praised your story and hope this helps your writers-ego out! Bravo!
The characters cracked me up. I was lmao when Kouga walked in, saw them in bed, leered and said "So if I throw a game... Will you sleep with me?...?..." Yeah that was great, lol. I felt that it was a bit odd that Miroku and Sango weren't as involved in the story as I'm used to, but oh well. The story was fine without it. Everything else was great. I guess as an avid Inuyasha fan, I get really into these stories, lol *grins sheepishly*. Who doesn't though!? Let's face it, we're all here for the same reason! To get some Inu-lovin'! He was so cute n hott! I wish I could tweak his cute lil ears (and then some, BUT that's entirely besides the point)!
I just loved the emotions and chemistry you put between Inu and Kag. The addicting kisses and then FINALLY the great lemons... I absolutely loved it in the last chap when he was talking to his mom. You did a fabulous job with that part, the whole story rocked, but that particular moment REALLY tugged on my heart strings. I think that part really applies to everything Inuyasha. I'm glad to see I'm not the only one who has praised your story and hope this helps your writers-ego out! Bravo!
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March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay...I will be honest, it took me a while to get into this story.....but...now, I just spent the last 12 hours reading it from beginning to end. O.O Just wanted to let you know I love this story never seen this genre before and I totally love it!
Please continue writing, reading your story has actually helped me get over my writers block, I'll be posting an update to my story soon. So thank you, so very much!
Please continue writing, reading your story has actually helped me get over my writers block, I'll be posting an update to my story soon. So thank you, so very much!
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March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association!
Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors/artist, Inuyashaloverr and KnittingKnots, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom.
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Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors/artist, Inuyashaloverr and KnittingKnots, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom.
Our official website can be found here:
http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/
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Check them out to see what you were nominated for!
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March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I can't believe it's over. I'm glad this story ended well! Congrats on finishing it and I am really starting to like He's My Girl! Already so sexy!!!!
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March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't tell you how happy I am to see the way this one ended... It was absolutely perfect.. Thank you so much for being such a great writer and sharing it with us. I will continue to read your stories as you post them.. You know I am a huge fangirl myself
Thanks and Hugs
Alpine
Your fangirl
Thanks and Hugs
Alpine
Your fangirl
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March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks. I noticed the new story, but I haven't had the opportunity to read it. I finally finished Twilight. It took me forever to find time to read it, but that is what spring break is for. LOL Well... that and getting a new update ready for Unlimited Determination and possibly Push...
Anyway, I love that conclusion. It was very... sweet... (The lemon was excellent.) I am so going to find your other stories b/c your writing is very intriguing.
Take care. Excellent story.
Anyway, I love that conclusion. It was very... sweet... (The lemon was excellent.) I am so going to find your other stories b/c your writing is very intriguing.
Take care. Excellent story.
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March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
As always.. A spectacular chappy... I can take the good with the bad when it comes to other peoples comments.. I expect it actually... makes me write better.. I just need to find a good beta but I haven't had too much of a chance to get onto the forum.. too busy working...
Look forward to another chap as always
Arigato AiKisugi-dono
Look forward to another chap as always
Arigato AiKisugi-dono
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March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! An update!
I figured that there was more to it soon. LOL I started wondering... where do you normally publish your works? I just realized what your a/n said on the first chapter, and I started wondering.
(Spring Break SOON!!!!)
Great update.
I figured that there was more to it soon. LOL I started wondering... where do you normally publish your works? I just realized what your a/n said on the first chapter, and I started wondering.
(Spring Break SOON!!!!)
Great update.
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March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Arigato AiKisugi-dono... I will look into that.. Still kind of weirded out by the whole idea of having other people read my stories..
Of course, I loved this chappy... I look forward to seeing how the rest plays out.
Hugs
Alpine
Of course, I loved this chappy... I look forward to seeing how the rest plays out.
Hugs
Alpine
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March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awwww... That was sweet. Hmmmm... Kagome is going to wind up singing with the band. I just know it. Not sure about the whole school thingy yet. LOL
"Like a love sick puppy chasin' you around..." LOL
"Like a love sick puppy chasin' you around..." LOL