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May 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
more?? plz I'm loving the story... don't stop at a oneshot continue plz!!!
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January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Two words. 1. WOW! 2. More!
Update soon! Please!
Update soon! Please!
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December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow... that was HOT. got me squirming .. hm. i cant wait to see what happens! !!!
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November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol i love this, i really love her random dirty talk! raRr!
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November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked itt :)
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November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I think I got the idea of a hinted at plot. I have to disagree with him pulling out to ejaculate. That steals the pleasure of a true completion. If he doesn't trust human birth control pills then he should wear a condom but that would deny him the pleasure of the fixation he has with seeing his semen on her. Sorry, not everybody likes being covered with semen. I liked the rest of the rutting scene though. Also, pulling out before ejaculation is not smart birth control. Semen is leaked throughout the act and all it takes is one tiny sperm and human birth control may not be able to stand against demon sperm. Plus, her vaginal area was covered with his semen which they both pushed inside with their fingers. I think I'll stay with the story to see where you take it. I'd enjoy reading a flashback on how they met and their first time together.