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Well except for the fact that the website seems to hate the last paragraph, it's done Hatsumomo who was Lad0 cutoff 3 times now, I really liked it. Is there going to be more of this eventually or is this it? I think you have 2 letters goofed up in Kaede's name though, you usually have ea instead of ae, in case you care.

Well, how should I say this... I really excited to read the next chapter - hope you updated soon - because I was looking for a fic where Sesshoumaru betrayed Kagome (it's hard to find that kind of story so far) and when I had almost forgotten to look for one under that category, you came up with one! Wow, I am soooo happy. And the plot is good, too! Keep up the good work - I love your creations - and update soon!!

I'm glad to hear that your doing a bit better. ^_^

Nice story. Kagome's gonna tear Sesshy a new one XD
This is the first time I've really read about Sesshys dad yelling at him like that!!
Keep up the great work.

Great story so far! But then, all your stories are great. I can't wait for the next installment in this one -- please do not let Kagome give in too quickly to Sess, please? I keep seeing this image of Sess getting the verbal shit kicked out of him by not only his parents, but Naraku, Inuyasha but all members of the mysterious Council all at once, with his proverbial tail between his legs. Oh, well. This early in the morning with no caffeine I can't be creative at all. However, it is clear that you have an abundance of creativity, so please update soon!

I enjoyed this chapter very much especially the part Kagome threw the whore out of the window. I wonder what he's gonna do when he finds out she wants to remove his mark.

adarna

yay ..one thing`s for sure...the council really should dissolve the mating bond...in my oppinion sesshoumaru should learn about the pain of losing a mate, so he can comprehend what kagome is going through...and then he can really start to win her back, and ask her to be his mate again because he loves her and not because it was decided by their parents
...hope you´re going to update soon

I love your story. It's very creative & original. I love how you have set up the first chapter & I can't wait to see what happens next. Sorry to hear about the troubles your having. Keep your chin up:)

i'm so lovin' this!!!