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This story has an interesting premise, but its way over the top. One minute she is a demure wife, the next minute she is burning stuff down and zooming around like pheonix, nearly burns sesshoumaru alive...then she calms down enough to go to court, where she speaks like Sesshoumaru (the 'this one' parts were awkward to me...) then she jumps up and rips Kagura's heart(?) out... All in the course of 2 chapters? Like i said the story sounds interesting enough but there is a lot going on. Maybe if you had a scene before the court scene where Kagome is reflecting (without acting pompously and on a power high) if your point is she still loves him but it furious at him. Just something to break up the action a bit

Also, it may just be me, but throwing in random Japanese words throws me off in reading. my BA is in international studies and Japanese, so it's not that I don't know the Japanese language. I just never really got the point of randomly throwing in a JApanese word if the story is in english, the words have no historical reference or anything to add to the story other than 'oh i know some japanese words'. Maybe they are references to the Inuyasha anime, but i've never seen the dubbed version before.

Absolutely love the story... For a moment I actually thought you quit the fic... I cant began to tell you how refreshing to see kagome strong and not some weak minded simpleton... who is always heartbroken... Keep up the great writing... ness

beautiful..........how u made it possible that Kagome has her heart. I do feel a bit sorrowful for Sesshomaru's beast. Good work. Great plot an original in its own right. It matters not how long u make this story I'll read it.

You´re right, you can´t stop loving someone in such a short time BUT time heals everything. I hope you´ll not bring them together again. I was in the same situation once but I´ve never regretted it not to try again with my ex-partner and now I´ve found a wonderful man who is perfect for me. I have forgiven him now but he hurt me too deeply and I just wanted to get away from him. It was the best thing I´ve ever done.
I was a bit dissapointed that Kagome is still mated to him because the argument that there is no one else that is strong enough to control her is bullshit. She´s already stronger than him and staying mated to him is just unreasonable. She should have killed the old fools. Sorry, people like that just make me angry. And how is it that Hatsumomo left that Izayoi bitch alive?

FINALLY! I have been waiting so long for this story. The one where Kagome doesn't forgive Sesshoumaru, at all, or not so fast and making so sappy, pathetic, etc.

This is the one! :D

*Evil Grin*

Poor Kagura. NOT!

*Evil laughter*

PLEASE update soon!! I'll be waiting ... and stalking you! ;)

wow. i love it. this whole "dominating kagome" thing is so working for me!! omg .. i almost cried, poor sessy's beast:(:(:(!! i cant wait to see what happens

Ok, lets get started with your review shall we...

Cons:
Kagome is wayyy to perfect and wayy to powerful.
I know this is your fanfiction and you can do w/e you want, but that bothers me.
Kagome's flaws is what make her Kagome. This OoC is exteme. She has a firey temper yes but she shows it when ever her emotions are riled up. And you mean to tell me that thoughout their mairrage he was never done so?
And kagome flying..wow..can't imagine that, just like I can't see Kagome as a doting little wife either.
And I dont think the demons should have reacted as strongly as they did.
Toga seemed to come off a little too strong. And kagome should be powerful in her own right not compared to sesshoumaru. There are many ways to execute a woman's wrath yours just seems extreme not creative
Pros:
Your sesshoumaru is ok, not revolutionary, but okay.
The premise of which your story is told is not uncommon but it has its certain flavor to it.

All in All in really can't bring myself to get into the story when I have these "Wtf?" moments while reading\
The plot is ok but the characters just seem a little out of wack to me. Men do stupid things especially this, but this is not all sesshoumaru's fault in that she didn't see sesshoumaru losing interest with her while she said herself that she made the transition of her family's needs into sesshoumaru's which is really a far stretch. which also led em to beileve is that she really doesn't know sesshoumaru. She thought that she needed to be submissive to him because of her training abd belief that that is what a mate should do, but wouldn't kags certain quickyness intervine with that? Or was that just the OoC talking?

Again this is your story and you can do w/e you want since you are the author and these are just my opinions on the fic thx!!

Love,
The Misconception

I love this story!!!!!

Please tell me you are still going to update it

dear sugar0o,
i hope i`m not getting on your nerves but i really hope for another chapter soon...i read your new story Voodoo and it`s really nice...nonetheless i`m almost gonna die out here waiting for the next chapter of kagome`s wrath ;) ...very please update soon :)

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?