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I enjoyed the story. It would be nice if it was finished off, feels like it was left hanging. If you consider Inu was in the throws of his heat, Miroku being there, both sealed behind a barrier in the cave and the girls waiting at the village for an explanation of what is going on..... So, considering that Miroku has technically marked Inuyasha by biting him once, albeit it was on shoulder and not where the lifeblood spot. And as a demon (or half-demon) him controlling him by biting Inu in the back of the neck wouldn't work unless his demon considered the one biting him a mate or his alpha. You could um, have Miroku properly mark him as mate or Inu baring his neck to initiate it. And somehow once the mating season/Inu's heat has passed that they make it back to the village to explain it to the girls???

please continue this is my fav fav fic n i been waiting for update for yearsssssssssssssssssss so please i begging u with tears do do dooooo dooooooooooooooo continue not many inu ukifics r there with miroku as seme dont know why
love your works n lov you tooo

i don't know about continuing it. i kinda like it the way it is. i like it so much that i've read it TWICE! i know i would LOVE to see someone illustrate this. it was incredibly hot Hot HOT! thank you so much for sharing with us.

I think that you should definitely have a confrontation and just to not be cliche make Kagome the understanding one and Sango the upset (if not crazy, obsessed b****, then reluctant antagonist). Sesshomaru should show up and perhaps be unimpressed by the relationship. Oh and Naraku should die.

omg, you continued! -flails and glomps you- Oh my, Miroku. You'll have fun when you get done with all that. Wonder how you and Inuyasha will be after it's all over. XD If Sango doesn't have you head first. shishishi >_<

ok, it was short, but very good nonetheless! moreover, i´m delighted to see that this isn´t abandoned...it would have been a shame. as for suggestions: first: some more rutting ;-) then their return to the girls, with a overly clueless kagome realizing what was going on in that cave and joining sango on the 'warpath' and last but not least: do an mpreg, please!! i would so love to see miroku faint at the news that he finally gets his kid, just not in the way he expected....oh, and before, how about making inu possessive/jealous when miroku flirts with others, motto: piss off wench, the only one who gets to be his bottom is ME! LOL

All I can say is please keep updating and please make longer chappies I know I am on of your many fans that would love to have them a tad bit longer and I hope inuyasha is gonna a be preggie by miroku call me ah on who loves love but I want kids lots of kids since that what miroku always wants soooo please make that happen keep up the awesome work and waiting for an update.

I loved it!! Keep it up!!

ENCORE ENCORE!! MORE MORE MORE!

this was greatness and I can't wait for an update!

Miroku felt like laughing at his little piece of advice but didn’t know what else to tell the hanyou. What were you supposed to say to a rutting half-demon that was practically oozing sexual energy in order to soothe him?

Now that we’re alone, would you care to fuck long, hard and continuously for the next few days?

That was priceless!

are you serious? "not that sood at sexy?!" That was agonizinly sexy! I can't wait for the next chapter, I'll be keeping my eye out!