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This is horrible how Sesshoumaru treated Inuyasha and his cousin is a bitch who will get what she deserves. I hope that things will be resolved between the two brothers, but his abuse should not go unpunished. I hope their Father gives Sesshoumaru a taste of his own medicine.

lovely story, can't wait for the next chapter - poor poor inuyasha .....

you need to finish this story cause I'm lovin it keep up the great work

I'm wondering how she "incites" Sesshoumaru's wrath. It would be soooo cute if she somehow hurt InuYasha (not severely, maybe like make him very upset) and Sesshy would be the one to save the day. OMG, I'm totally letting my fangirlyness run away with me. I liked the chapter even though it was short. It made me miss the interaction between the brothers, though. Can't wait for more.

Awesome chapter although Sesshoumaru is still a big jerk to hurt Inuyasha. It will be good to find out who the Father is of that pup.

KILL THE BITCH! (No pun intened) I hate her already! And that pup is Nurakus!

Please update soon!

it is realy good. i though u said that the other girl was not going to get pg. so now three are pg at the same time. at thisnpoint i'm not sure if i want to know whats going to happen.

Hey I just reviewed this on reg fanfiction-glad to see u have put this on here also! I do have one question I forgot to put on my review on fanfiction-what happens if Inuyasha goes into labor and it's not a new moon night-he's not stuck as a female?!!! Hope Sess starts treating him better, 'cuz Sess is being alittle jerk right now and I think Dad needs to put him in his place!!!

I doubt Sesshoumaru becoming a daddy is good news. The person referred to him as 'Lord Sesshoumaru' which definitely implies that it wasn't Toga. The only explanation is that that person was Kaori's father. NOOOOOOOOOO!!!! Anyway, I enjoyed this chapter a lot. Sesshoumaru's declaration of only wanting to procreate with his brother and nothing more intrigues me, especially since some of his actions don't really go along with what he is saying. I definitely can't wait for the next update.

I love the story, full of drama and intensity. I just don't like Sesshoumaru's mother. She's a total b*&th, and wants to hurt Inuyasha, which is such a no no. lol I wish she would just roll over and die. @_@ that was a little harsh I know...but it has nothing to do with your writing style...it means that you are doing a great job with portraying the characters...the villians and heroes... Well I wouldnt actually call Sesshoumaru a hero since he seems like the male version of his mother. Inuyasha so deserves better then that a-hole. lol I love Sesshoumaru though and I hope that he comes to appreciate Inuyasha before its too late and he breaks his little brothers spirit.

Why why couldn't Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha's father

have Izayoi as his only mate...grrr! hehe and she's with pup too! NOOOOO!!! and to make it worse...Sesshoumaru has another who is potentially his youkai mate. All those antagonists need to burn! how
could Inuyasha's father accept Izumi after deceit...after confirming from her own lips that she wants to hurt Inuyasha. Poop Inuyasha!

Love you work