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for Total Eclipse of the Heart

by xxLadyElennaxx

schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hello there, let me first say I have read A LOT of Sesshomaru and kagome fanfiction, including writing one or two (both having tanked *sigh*).
I may not be a good writer but i know a good story when i see it, that having been said there are only THREE Sesshomaru & Kagome fanfiction that I LOVE and read over and over. Yours my love are one of them :D
You have a gift, I love how the relationship is flowing between Mr. Ice and Mrs. Fire. And its great how you are making Sesshomaru a father figure to Shippo, training him to hunt taking him under his wing sort to speak. Please make this story a looooooooooong one, please make each chapter a looooooooooooong one. And this I BEG OF YOU update and post FREQUENTLY!

Waiting eagerly for the next chapter :)
Christiana
person Alpine02
schedule March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Can't wait to see where this goes.. I think I might have an idea but I am looking forward to seeing..
person sysclp
schedule March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the new chapter! Enjoying the story and hopefully your recent problems are over so you can update faster in the future. I can tell there are some "interesting" times coming soon.
schedule January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that took you a long time, no? thanks for updating. Hope you are ready for the next one and post it soon
person paulymoon
schedule January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have almost forgot this story existed, I like how you portrait sesshoumaru, and I definitely like his uncle he sounds really cool. And I can´t wait to know what is all the secret about kagome. Great job!!! :)
person Crysan
schedule December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good story Update Soon!!!!!
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love the story can't wait to read more smiles have fun
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sure hope you would continue soon
can't wait
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great story so far . when are you gonna update it . cause i really want to know whats gonna happen next.

UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
thanks keep up the great work
person paulymoon
schedule November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story!!!! I can´t wait for the next chapter.