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for Total Eclipse of the Heart

by xxLadyElennaxx

person Trollolololol
schedule September 24, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Where is the rest?  If you've abandoned this story... why?

schedule October 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! When are you going to update again? I have to know what Kagome does to the Council for putting those STUPID restrictions on her, and who she gets bonded to. PLEASE???!!!!
schedule September 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh come ON!! don't let it stop there! keep going, i've really gotten into this story and would love to see the council change their decision later on down the line. great work so far!!!
schedule July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*cries* NUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!! This is so SAD!!!! =( Poor Kagome! How could Sesshy agree to that?! Oh, he is SO uninvited to the wedding! *growls and grumbles about egotistical human-hating youkai with pretty hair*... XD I'm a new fan of this story! And I can't wait to read more!!! ^_^
person Kiiten01
schedule June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Curious to see where the story will go from here/kagomae's reactions, hope you plan to update/keep going with this story i like your style of writing XD anyway as for the others who cant do anything but complaing if you dont like the story dont read it, there are plenty of other ones and this is there vision not yours with that said please update soon!!!
schedule April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i have loved this story up until this chapter, i even gave u the benefit of the doubt on the chapter before when they first started to make decisions for her, and she was just letting them, after this chapter it made me so mad and peeved that u would make kagome so weak and quiet, the real kagome would stand up for herself and not let them dictate her life. kagome is not wea and u are souring a really good story, why doesnt she just purify everyones asses and get the hell outta of there and dare sesshoumaru, agree with her right to not have a child, what the hell is his deal, i am so angry right now, I am not gonna tell u how to do your story but kagome is not docile and weak and for something this huge so wouldnt let them rule her. She was acting like sesshoumaru have to protect her and she has to be quiet, i await what u will do next chapter....

schedule April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow Just as good as the last one. It is sad at what they are doing to Kagome.
person pauly
schedule April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I really like your writing style, and I think this story is very interesting. I can't wait to read the reaction of kagome. Great job!!!! :)
person pauly
schedule April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I really like your writing style, and I think that this story is very interesting. Can't wait to read the reaction of Kagome, I mean, who they think they're to decide anything over her life. Great job!!! :)
schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hope you continue sooner. took you a long time on that one. anyways, loved it