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December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome update!!! I really love this fic!!! If you are looking for suggestions, you could tie the three chapters together by having Inuyasha, Kouga, and Sesshomaru all gang up on Miroku and 'teach him a lesson' XD
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December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thats too bad that sess/inu and kouga won't be in later chapters because reading about all three getting together to make miroku pay and give him a taste of his own addiction would be hot........but oh well i like maybe bankostu or jakostu or both if he can pull that off........how about naraku.....that would be something.....please update soon
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December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay
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November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
There is no pretty much raping people. You have Miroku raping people, end of story. He abuses his power as a monk and traps them against their will. At no time do his victims consent in your story.
Anyways, no matter how embarassed Inuyasha was after it happened, he would have killed Miroku once he recovered.
So, Miroku's days are pretty much numbered by this point.
Anyways, no matter how embarassed Inuyasha was after it happened, he would have killed Miroku once he recovered.
So, Miroku's days are pretty much numbered by this point.
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November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i agree with SAGE i want the next to be sesshomaru
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November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hot chapter!!! I think for the third chapter it should be Bankotsu(I hope it doesn't piss you off too much like kouga) if not him, then Sesshoumaru.
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November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i want to see miroku put in his place by sesshou
that would be delishes
update soon please
that would be delishes
update soon please
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November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy Crap, if at all possible to see Sess being taken by the monk...I truly can't wait to read that one....
But it would be freakin' AWESOME, if Miroku get's a taste of his own addiction!!!
But it would be freakin' AWESOME, if Miroku get's a taste of his own addiction!!!
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November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great job. I'd like to see him with sesshoumaru
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November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was short but interesting and well written. I really like MiroInu in pretty much any form. I haven't read any of these but try MiroKoga or MiroJako. Have you thought of other pairs to put in? SessInu, KogaInu, NaraMiro... Pairings that you could start the story with and then make a transition into another match. I look forward to your next update, you've got potential.