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by YZZak

schedule March 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad I got to finally finish it I wasn't sure I would like it at first but I did I look foraward to more of your work.
person Peya Luna
schedule March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well, guess we should have known that a natural born slut like miroku would enjoy this ;-) the lemon was simply awesome, and i like the thought of inu+miroku going at it like rabbits behind sango´s+kagome´s back - cause you can´t tell me that those two are gonna stop after this! i wonder what sango will think when her lecher suddenly is so uninterested in sex (with her, anyway ;-) or worse, discovers lovebites/clawmarks in very private places *evil grin* about sess: he didn´t seem that interested in fucking miro to me(maybe beause of his general distaste of anything/anyone human)...and i´ve noticed that ginta seemed very interested in sess, even licking his cum of miro, so why not pair them up? they would make an interesting couple, i can almost see the gentle wolf playing with rin....and jaken would so get a stroke LOL however, my most favorite thing of this chapter . if not of the whole story - was inu´s 'reasoning' why kouga should go first XD just priceless!!
person LadyWolf
schedule March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
We all know that Sessy is special....I wonder is he just waiting to get his 'Payback' He'll prob..lock our little monk in a cell and do all kinds of wicked things to him.....


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schedule March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The only thing I can say about this chapter is, DAMN!!! That was unbearably hot, and I can't wait for the next chapter!!! Another group chapter would be awesome, and Sesshomaru hasn't mounted Miroku yet (wink wink)!!!
person anon
schedule March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think Sesshomaru still needs a tun in mounting him.
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOL! The bad monk was suppose to be punished, but Ginta, Inuyasha and Kouga made sure he enjoyed it way too much! The only ones that hurt and embrassed the monk was Sesshoumaru and the leader of the Band of Seven Great short story!
person LadyWolf
schedule February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, you need to get Inu, Sess, and Kou together and give Mirouku a taste of his own addiction...

See how he likes it!!! Hell that might be the hottest thing!!!
person peyaluna
schedule February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i´m REALLY into the payback idea, let inu+sessy+kouga take turns until even a pervert like miroku can´t get it up anymore+ is way past begging for mercy...and unable to sit for weeks ;-) btw, i wonder what sango would think of his 'special activities'....and don´t you dare to forget your inu+ginta story over this, i´ve been waiting for an update on that one for what feels like eternity!
schedule December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really tried to get past it, but I really can't get behind a protagonist that is waiting in line to buy his ticket to the evil train. Your other story about Ginta and Inuyasha is better, but it's just my opinion , and if you like writing this kind of story, keep at it, but eventually Miroku should have his comuppance handed to him on a large silver platter.
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic. I think Jakotsu should be Miroku's playmate.