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SPELL CHECK PLEASE!

not to post any flames, but, did anyone mention that you need spell check? this fic was torture to read due to the horrible misspelling of almost every other word. please make the necessary changes and repost. Thank you.

I hate flames so i'll be polite , You really need to spellcheck , Love the story so far but its hard to understand it with the errors

There is one major problem and that's the number of spelling and grammar errors that arise throughout the story. What I would advise is that you seek out a Beta writer who would be willing to sit down and fix these problems. The reason why I advise this over just editing it yourself is that in the process since you know what you think you wrote down you'll skip over the errors. The other reason why I'd advise a beta writer is that many people are afraid of editing their own work since finding errors tends to hurt the ego. If you'd like I will be willing to edit for you just email me and I'll start right away. (kykio2@hotmail.com)

Please update soon!! I really want to find out whats going to happen next. So UPDATE!!
thanks,
suniko

I like the premise but you may want to get a beta. I saw a lot of gramatical as well as spelling errors. Are you aware that you misspelled Kouga's name in the title? I think you should work on that but continue with the story!!