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November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sesshoumaru finally makes his entrance. this was another masterful chapter. and now we are left wondering just what has awakened in inuyasha. he seems to be controlled by an elemental force. it was something that sesshoumaru was not surprised by. the imaginings in my mind were set free by this chapter. great job.
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November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY! I love this. Its getting more interesting...more mystery. I hope you post the next soon. Inuyasha is so deep in all this that I am so excited to know what he can do. And I'm so happy that Sesshoumaru has made an appearance. And he seems to know what Inuyasha's condition is. I can't wait to read more.
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November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is mt first review, I have read this storie before on another site and I have to say it is one of the best and very imaginitive, I have read it through chap 13 and hope to see it finished here this storie only gets better and better, please up date soon.
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November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really good.
whene does sessomaru come in?
whene does sessomaru come in?
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November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok ok i likie
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November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this story. But I keep wondering why did Naraku kidnap Inuyasha? Is he just keeping him around to have another lackey?
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November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i look with awe at the intensity of your writing. the confused emotions of the characters only serves to make the story more compelling to the reader. even the slight breaks of continuity only serve to strengthen the off balance feeling this story gives. i love it.
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November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn this story is deep! In the best possible way! I thought for a few moments you were going to have Naraku make Inu and Kaugra make babys for him.... I really Loved the whole aura deal and it makes a lot of sense too!
I lookforward to seeing where this story will lead me! Cuz I'm definetly along for the ride!
THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!!!!
I lookforward to seeing where this story will lead me! Cuz I'm definetly along for the ride!
THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!!!!
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October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow this is getting good cant wait for the next part
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October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
May I have some more please???