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Hahaha! I loved Momoeiko! Poor Inuyasha, I imagine his mood was thoroughly smashed. It's definitely unsettling to be interupted, but by your katana wielding mother? Priceless.

Awwww!! Yeah, Inuyasha and Kagome! Not only do they kiss, we get a minor lime. And did he really agree to marry her or was he just telling her what she wanted to hear? (That man better be telling the truth, otherwise you'll have to sic' his Mom on him.) God, I loved the Mom when she came in, threatened her son and then walked away as if nothing had happened when Kagome said that she was willing. I was laughing out loud at that one. Too funny!

Well, please keep Inuyasha on the straight and narrow. Pretty please!! :-)

Tease!!

TEASE!!

Damn, girl, I thought we were going to have some smexy smex in this one! *harrumphs* Still, this was awesome! WOW...I can't believe Inu agreed to marry Kagome! O.o I wasn't expecting that! But now I'm so happy for Kags, getting to marry hawt InuYasha!! "Luckyyyyyyyy...."

Great chapter - I can't wait for your next one! You're really working now - man, I need to write!!

Ah! Thanks. A first kiss between Inuyasha and Kagome. More please! I was glad to see Inuyasha a little jealous after your last story. Can they get even closer. Pretty please with sugar on top? Now what would be really sweet would be if Kikyo made a pass at Kagome since she looks like Souta. That would be hilarious.

And is Kikyo betraying everyone already? It looks like she has already hooked up with Naraku. And will Souta show up in time to save the day? Inquiring minds want to know!

*gasps* Naraku??!! I'm assuming, but maybe not...? Jeez, you never know with your stories! It could be the Easter Bunny for all I know! Well, a dark, sinister Easter Bunny, maybe....

I LOVED the scene in the beginning!! I was laughing my ass off when Rin kicked InuYasha in the face and jumped over him!!! LMAO!!! That and when Kagome showed up after getting beat up (somewhat), and then was like, "Alrighty then! Time to go!" Way too funny! You got it, girl~! I can't wait for another chapter, and *blushes* thanks so much for the congrats! I definitely wasn't expecting them, but am happy nonetheless!! :o)

WEEEEEEE!!!! I love it!! I was SOOOOO stoked to see you had updated so quickly!! And this chapter BLEW MY SOCKS OFF!! XD InuYasha...tsk tsk. Such denial riddling his brain. I love how he calls her, "Stupid girl." LOLS - Come on, Yash, I know a pet name when I hear one! :D Great how Kagome's fears are coming out; very realistic. I love it! And you changed the summary; it's cute! Great update, ma'am!! And I was surprised I didn't get lashed from you by my last chapter before the one I posted last night. I was sure you were going to let me have it because I broke up the almost-kiss! LOLZ Anyway, great chapter - can't wait for the next! :)

Its probably not going to go very well, knowing Kikyo. She gets so worked up over Inu being with Kags.

Hi, I just finished reading the first 6 chapters last night. I think that you might want to change your summary. One of the reasons I was holding off from reading your story was because it seemed like a very dark angsty story from your summary. But when I started reading it it seemed light hearted and even humorous at parts. (I just can't handle too much angst and I actually prefer light hearted ficts. So that's good for me! Yeah!)

Well, after reading that this was also based on Battle Vixens I looked them up on Wikipedia. I hope that you allow Kagome's character to be a little smarter than the original one from Battle Vixens. Puleaze? And of course I am eagerly awaiting a wonderful lemon between Inu/Kag. Maybe after she gives him a massage in the bathtub...? I'd love to see Kagome seducing Inuyasha. Hee hee... Oh and maybe getting him a little jealous because of Sesshomaru. After your last story I think we need to see Inuyasha getting more jealous rather than the other way around.

I'm assuming that this story will be heading toward a love triangle between Kikyo/Inuyasha/Kagome. Just give me a happy ending with Inu/Kag...Pretty please? OK see you for the next chapter! :-)

I've never actually read the series, but I'm familiar with the concept. I think it's pretty cool that you're writing this. Good luck.

OMG, when I saw that this was updated, I "SQUEEEEEEE!"'d so loud, my dog left the room! LMAO This is getting crazy intense!! I can't believe all of the twists and turns everything is taking, and I absolutely LOVE Kagome's harbored dragon! This pretense is so awesome - I love it! I can't wait to see what's going to happen with InuYasha...was that jealousy he was feeling when he first saw Kagome hug Sesshomaru, or was it anger from being kept in the dark? Hmmm....

Anyway, I love this and can't wait for another update!! Glad to see you're back! :o)