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for Hell Hath No Fury

by ShouraiChan

person LIlmamma
schedule October 4, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Ok so I am slightly confused about something. You use the words pup and cub when talking about Inuyasha and Kouga, but the way you have decribed Inuyasha it's as if he is human, Kouga has pretty much remained the same, but the way you have it if sounds like they are human and not demons, which does make sense since Kouga is suppose to be Inuyasha's hlaf brother, which would make him a hanyou as well...........anyway I guess what I'm asking is, if they are human then why refer to them as pup and cub, if you would you can email me at mammawolf247365@yahoo.com, please make the subject INUYASHA so that I know what it is about.

 

Other than that confusing bit I really am enjoying the story.

person LIlmamma
schedule October 3, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I just finished chapter 3 and I am loving this story.

schedule January 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God!! This story is amazing. If you update on another site or continued it on another site please let me know cuz I'm dying to find out how this story ends. It's well thought out, incredibly complex, and I'm gushing like the school girl that I haven't been for a really long time. Please update soon. I need to know what happens next.
schedule April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, girl - sorry for the late review, but life is kicking my ass right now! *rubs back side* Damn, that smarts!

As usual, awesome update! We got some good Naraku/Kagura action, Ayame's excitedness may prove to be problematic, and now Souta may be coming back! *gasps* Wicked, wicked girl! I was thinking for a minute it might be Kouga, but you shocked me yet again! :D

CLIFFIE!! *breaks out the whip* Shame on you! Now what am I supposed to read until you update this? xd Of course - Tales is updated, too!

*makes for Tales in a hurry*
person Alpine02
schedule April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Again.. an absolutely fabulous chappy.. ty very much.. And I love Hanky Panky too and it is not often enough in civilized conversation that I get to use the phrase.. LOL..

I am now headed to your update on Frat and I can't wait.. And as alway, love your updates to pieces...

Hugs
Alpine
person Alpine02
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!!! (jumps up and down) So happy to see another chappy... This one was great.. I laughed so hard... A little hanky panky for Kougs and Kags... HMMMM don't do it girl, just don't do it.. Inu and Kag have to keep it together... Please update soon

Can't wait till you update Youkai Frat too. I am hooked.

Hugs
Alpine
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome update, chick! OMG, I love Rin so much! She cracks me up for real! XD Man, I was hoping for a little Inu/Kag action, but probably not for quite a while, it seems! *sighs* Maybe I'll have to go write my own! *snickers* I can't wait to see how this plan works out! No worries about the disappearing act, lol - real life happens sometimes! :D Can't wait for the next chapter!
person Alpine02
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a totally great story. I love that the characters are a bit ooc but it really works. I can't wait to see where this is going.
schedule March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
person socalgal
schedule March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is great! I love it! Please keep going! You have a great writing style, but there are a lot of typos. Other than that, I'm really enjoying it! Please update soon!