rate_review Reviews

I realy liked itt,
This is soo sweet (:
Although ... dont you thikn that the crying is a little ...
ooc for Sess? Just a little?
Oh well, it adds effect ;)
Good Job. Continue?

Hell even while being cruel to rin sesshomura is still sexy as hell, and rin will always be his no matter what he does to her. She will accept it for i beleive that deep down she loves him.

This story could have been fleshed out a bit more, but it was still admirable. Might i suggest that ou finsih with Sesshomaru explaining himself? Hopefully with a happy ending.

This is a very well rounded story. Short chapters but each have enough detail to bring this story alive. Now many people entail sesshomaru as the perfection of control but this story entails his true faults that he has yet to realize. To me, this story tells of how he learns his 'goods' and 'bads, through the little human girl rin who sees this man as her life. That is very powerful and tells a great emotional battle of life that these two live outside of the inuyasha story but also from the lesson that the great inu no taisho had spoken of. I feel that the taisho knew the issues that arise in demon/human relations and felt that through sesshomaru's control, he could learn his own fault but that he could also learn how much real strength he never knew he had. SO i wanted to give you a review on your well rounded and very good story and i cant wait to see whats next. Update me and i have a few stories myself if you want to check them out but until then. KUDOS!!

amazing. more please.

I don't think he would do that, but it is your story. I couldn't ever see Sesshoumaru hurting her.

Oh My O____O
That was so well written, yet it was scary.
Good job though.