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for Moonlight

by teensiesama

person Anon
schedule January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it but you have a problem. Chapters 3 & 4 are the same chapter, so I'm not sure if chapter 5 is actually chapter 4 or if chapter 4 is missing & chapter 5 is chapter 5.
person Lavizzy
schedule December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOVE this story

update!
person sugar0o
schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i'm reviewing because your more Teensie ^_^ today has been trying, but this was a nice chapter! - r0o
person xcc
schedule October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was hot and surprising. Are you going to continue it, right?
I'm intrigued.
Thanks for the story.
person sugar0o
schedule October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
haha hi :D

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< u > words here < / u > for underlines

good luck ^_^
person sugar0o
schedule October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
* o yeah, no spaces :p
person sugar0o
schedule October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol i'm so glad to see this here! glad i could help getting you here as well. i think you;ll do lovely on this site and this story yEy! yours - r0o

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