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A sequel please

I finally found the rest of this story on this site. I finally got to read the end & I cried my eyes out.
But it was great.....

Thank you for a wonderful story.

Inuyasha turned out to be a real piece of shit & I hope he suffered a hellish, lonely, miserable life for as long as he lived.

So beautiful <3 its the second time i read it! Love the last part of the last chapter

Congratulations on your Dokou nomination! XD Great story.

I will apologize now for not reviewing any of your chapters.. I am a late comer to this fic.

Since I knew the ending was drawing near I thought i would give you a nice long review instead of breaking it up and posting the same things over and over again.

I will say, very very very well written. I am not a big fan of Kagome/Sesshoumaru fics, and to be honest, i wasn't really going to read this one, until my friend sent me the link for it. Wow was I pleased that i did read it. Looking back now, I am thinking i am a fool for not even considering looking at the Kagome/Sesshoumaru fics. I would have misses out on this wonderful piece of work.

Your writing talent is amazing, I am envious, and i wish I could have a story come out the way i wanted it to.. never mind actually finish one.

I loved your wordings, and your idea for the story. a very nice ending to the story, and i sincerely wish to see a squeal. However, the way this story ended, I think it could also be left as it.

This has to be my favorite Inuyasha fanfic ever written, which says a lot. You deserve to have the best cannon for this story. AND you have my vote!

Now that i have read this story, I am going to definitely look through your other ones! For sure.

Alas, the only thing I have to say, is for the last few chapters, I noticed that your spelling and grammar slid a tad, but this could be out of your wish to get it posted for us readers. Just a word of caution, it's not a good habit to get in to. Remember, that a story's end is just as important as the beginning. So Grammar and Spelling are a must have.

That being said, I found no flaws in the characters portrails(sp?), in fact they where so well done I could have sworn this was written by the creator them self. Very Very Very good job.

And Many thanks for sharing this story with all of us. You have earned my respect as both a reader and an author alike. I sincerely wish that you continue with your creative writings, and I hope that you have a career out of this. Because you would do well.

Best wishes for your health and happiness

~Ayame~

ITS GREAT THAT SHE FOUND HAPPYNESS AFTER ALL SHE'S BEEN THROUGH. BUT WHAT HAPPENS AFTER? DOES SHE TELL HER FAMILY, SOUTA WILL BE DEVISTATED AT THE SAME TIME HE'LL BE SO HAPPY! (LOSS A BEST FRIEND AND GAIN A SISTER) WHAT WILL HER TRIALS BE WITH SESSHOMARU, DID HE EVER HAVE A MATE (DUE TO DUTY?) DOES THE WESTERN LANDS STILL EXSIST? OKAY... TOO MANY QUESTIONS... LOL

OVERALL I LOVED THIS STORY! WHENEVER YOU UPDATED I FOUND MYSELF WISHIG YOU'D CONTINUE. IF YOU EVER WRITE A SEQUEL, I'LL LOVE EVERY MINUTE OF IT!

GOOD LUCK!

I just finished reading your story, and I just wanted to say that I enjoyed it immensly. You are a very talented writer, and I do hope that one day you will create a sequel to this story!

Love the story, especially the fact that Sesshomaru had to actually take TIME to come to terms with his feelings. Makes him that much more in character. I think my only gripe is that Kagome up and left with him at the end, without a word to her family. In other words, now the daughter AND the dog are missing. Seemed a little...loose string-ish? Other than that, wonderfully done!

ahhhhhh!!!!!!!!! you CAN'T leave it there!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHH!!!! at least make a sequel!!!!!!!!!!!!

Awww.It ended. You have to make a sequel!! Kagome choosing to be in dog form when pregnant! lol. that wuld be funny for sesshy to try to explain. Could you email me when you post a sequal?