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October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sorry but this story is HORRIBLE. I don't even know where to start...
the setup is bad, how Kagome goes to fighting to complete acceptance in a matter of sentences...? what IS this??
At the very least try getting someone to look over it for you. Lots of typos. For example, I believe the word is 'penance' not 'pendence' or whatever you put.
the setup is bad, how Kagome goes to fighting to complete acceptance in a matter of sentences...? what IS this??
At the very least try getting someone to look over it for you. Lots of typos. For example, I believe the word is 'penance' not 'pendence' or whatever you put.
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October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
way ooc, its almost like demons had possesed them, the demon of extreme ooc.
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October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Works for me I guess. Maybe a sequel chapter of Kagome having to service Miroku like Inuyasha mentioned?
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October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Pretty disturbing
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October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ida know...I mean, I love the whole Inu-Dominating thing, but only if Kagome is admitting that she enjoys to certain extents. Otherwise, I'd rate it pretty good...it's just a little disturbing to see Inuyasha so sadistically cruel and Kagome not enjoying it as opposed to if he was being sadistically cruel and she DID enjoy it. Good job nonetheless!
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October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Everything seems swell. Im interested in what you have planned, though it sucks to see Inu so ... MEAN ( I know.. sucha stupid word to describe it) but yeah.. I'm curious. One suggestion .. I don't know .. but maybe its the whole "whore" talk, it sometimes get cheesy. but other than that, good. aaha