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October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am writing this NOT as a FLAME BUT as a inform; I f watched the movies and read the manga, you would know that Kagome had attempted more than once to try to take off the ROSARY and that it was broken off at least once so the statement that she never thought about if or tried to take it off is undeniably incorrect.
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October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. hope a M/F/F threesome is coming up(there aren't enough of that kind). maybe inuyasha could "break-in" Ayame and start building a harem^^. Anyway same request as last time please DON'T let inuyasha "share" his bitch(es) with anybody male. Seriously PLEASE.
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October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am only posting a review because of your AN I don't know how many women would put up with a man constantly belittling them and not have some form of retaliation. I have no idea if you are male or female but it seems as if you don't believe in a woman defending herself. If any man did to me as InuYasha did to Kagome I would give him a lot worse than a sit. He would be lucky to leave with his manhood still intact. Mental abuse is just as bad as physical if not more so.
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October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you wrote another chapter for this instead of leaving it a one-shot. Although not what I expected, it was still quite well done. Yes Mrs. Higurashi is a MILF and yet never seems to get laid. Poor woman. Keep writing please. And I'm really curious to see what else you have in store for your readers.
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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i don't like the fact that inuyasha is more into kagome's mom than kagome herself. it's like it's defeating the purpose of it being a kagome/inuyasha fic. i'm just hoping that kagome's mom loses the baby and she doesn't become inuyasha's mate...(sigh) i hope it doesn't end with inuyasha not being with kagome as her mate. good story tho
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October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
distrubing... way out of the picture, it's good to have your ideas but perhaps i can suggest you some 're-plotting', you see, Inuyasha is not that bad, clueless maybe but totally not heartless and Kagome is just a sweet girl, by the way their companion are totally not stupid, protective of Kagome even, but still, it's your plot... you own the plot, did you not?....
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October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*EXPLODES* INUYASHA YOU @&@#^*&^#P^&*P#^!&^#&*^*&^#*&!(^#(!^*&^%!$%~#$^%~@$%^$~O)*@^&(~&@(~&)~&(#~%%^~#$%@#~$*%^#$^%$~%^$@~%^$@%(*~@*)....
*takes deep breath*
@*#@&^@%#%$@%^!$*!%^^!%*^%!(^!^!&^!&%!^!%^#)!*)!)!()!*@^~$#@~#~GHJDLGYTI@R**!)_(@!+(~)~__)&*@&*%^@&~IOP)~!&^~&$~@~#$!(P*~)_(!#@$@$%!)*!~
*exhales*
Whew...I feel better now, lol. I cannot believe Inuyasha is SO cold to Kagome! His logic makes NO sense; he'll torture Kagome, but he'll do it with her mom and try and impregnante her? Like it's the most natural thing in the world??!?!?!?!? GOD, I hope Inuyasha comes to his senses!!! I'm looking forward to the next chapter, lol!
(PS: Pretty name you have for Kagome's mom ^_^)
*takes deep breath*
@*#@&^@%#%$@%^!$*!%^^!%*^%!(^!^!&^!&%!^!%^#)!*)!)!()!*@^~$#@~#~GHJDLGYTI@R**!)_(@!+(~)~__)&*@&*%^@&~IOP)~!&^~&$~@~#$!(P*~)_(!#@$@$%!)*!~
*exhales*
Whew...I feel better now, lol. I cannot believe Inuyasha is SO cold to Kagome! His logic makes NO sense; he'll torture Kagome, but he'll do it with her mom and try and impregnante her? Like it's the most natural thing in the world??!?!?!?!? GOD, I hope Inuyasha comes to his senses!!! I'm looking forward to the next chapter, lol!
(PS: Pretty name you have for Kagome's mom ^_^)
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October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I commend you for going somewhere different with this...it's definitely unconventional, which can be controversial sometimes and will always get some people worked up, but the best ones are sometimes the most risque ones. I wonder, however, if you're going to go somewhere...happier with this story. If not, it may work better being posted under "Darkfics." Anyway, kudos for originality!
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October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow ... her MOM? and getting her pregnant? i sense a plot here. ? i hope so. .cause i already know that inu's attitude is getting on my nerves. ARGH i can't believe it. but all the lemon stuff, i can deal with it.i've read worse. continue:)
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October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really nice. different kind of story. really like it.
PS: just one request: please don't let inuyasha "share" kagome with anybody else/male (don't know why, but the thought of other guys dicks in kagome is a major turnoff for me)
PS: just one request: please don't let inuyasha "share" kagome with anybody else/male (don't know why, but the thought of other guys dicks in kagome is a major turnoff for me)