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Definitely the best lemonfic I've read in a while. Yummy.

I really liked this story. It was well written and as far as i could tell had no grammatical errors or misspells that are common in fanfics. I like Hiei and Kagome fanfics :D, but have you ever thought of reworking this story so that Yusuke and Keiko get their intended target? Maybe as a slightly dark fic? Well, anywho. I really did like this fic and I will be reading the rest of your fanfics. XD
Ja Ne!
Kimimisae

Heh heh! Okay, I'll take the blame for encouraging your muse to twist Yusuke and Keiko. They were so darn funny in this! And really, I can see Yusuke going a little overboard if Keiko let him. ^_~ He always was grabby-squeezy. LOL! I loved the scene where Genkai burst in him. Their dialogue was spot-on.

I love the heat in this. The stone was a great device for lots of yummy naughtiness. The way you built up the tension between Hiei and Kagome was awesome. I couldn't believe she kissed him like that! I was just picturing the looks on everyone's faces. When Yukina asked Kagome what it was like, I just howled with laughter. And when Hiei first felt those hands on him when he was alone ... yowza! He went from suspicious and angry to "don't stop what you're doing" pretty quickly. ^_~ And then he completely took over. All of the goodness of a well-written lemon WITHOUT it truly being a lemon. You, girl, are a genius.

And what a great satisfying ending! Time to take it to the next level. ^_~ (Keep running, Yusuke!) Your Hiei/Kag fics are ALWAYS a gourmet treat. ^_^

I love your stories~~ love!!! You are one of the few authors that I never critique! Well I hope to see more!!

Ja Ne,
Infinite Silence

This was funny. I loved the way Yusuke went as Kagome and Hiei's interference that was great. The way it was ended was a tease though, even though they might has well had sex with that little stone being in his pocket... I love your other stories as well. Keep up the great work.

Oh wow This is amazing! It's very different from your darker stories! (even though I love them just as much) You, and madmiko are a force to be reckoned with.

I just love your stories. I've reread all your previous stories many times, I hope when you are able you'll be able to update them. Thanks for all the great hours worth of reading.