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did he mark her as his mate? pup her?

Awh you could have so added more to that, that wasnt a cliff that was just plain out lazyness. But well written anyways, but yer still a lazy buttface! O.o

lmao, now what abotu this tattoo

Overall I like, although there are some odd typos scattered throughout. I have to ask though, what in the world are bog leg panties?

o my, wow, So he was coherent for that eh? 0o0o0o my i cant wait to see where this goes ^_^ - r0o

I really like where you've gone with this story. Interesting how her powers shocked him out of what Naraku, grew his arm back, and yet still pissed him off enough that his beast remained in control. Love it. I wonder though how well he's going to take it when he's back in control of himself....also, was he conscious of everything that his beast was doing or was it like he was out of it the whole time? I always wonder about that. Anyway, can't wait to see what you come up with next. :)

Looks good, can't wait to see where you go from here!