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December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well I liked the new chapter but it could use going over, a few sentences make little to no sense & in spots you have too many words like in 1 place you have to two & it should be just two, also in the made her madder part it would be better if the words were rearranged.
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December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and you really need to update it very soon or I swear I'll die! lol... very good job.
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December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY Sesshomaru is in the place! *grin* I really REALLY can't wait for more! please, update as soon as possible!!!!
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December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i'm s0o0o0o0o happy that you updated again! i cannot wait to see where this goes b/c well its just s0o0o interesting! update again soon - r0o!
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December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
come on you left a cliffy when it was getting really good. i wanted to see sesshomaru's reaction when he realizes that kagome is pregnant and his mate. plus i can't wait for inuyasha's reaction to the whole thing. update soon.
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December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More more more!!!! You are doing a great job and I am very much enjoying this story. I look forward to what is coming next. Keep up the great work.
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December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More
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December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, now it looks like it's really gonna get interesting! Thank you for posting your work and I can't wait for more! ^_^
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December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AHHH!!!!! he found his mate!!
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November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story!! Please update sooner! I really like how you have your charachters set up. I hate it when authors have Kagome as a whiny little push over, but you have her the way I think she truely is in the anime. Keep up the good work!!