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for Unexpected Problems

by Darkmoonfae

person estelin
schedule July 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this was great
person marcia
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*snicker* He got smacked. Serves him right for insulting his son.
schedule January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!
schedule December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!! This is awesome, and I can't wait for you to continue this story. So.....how are you gonna explain Kagome's demon traits?
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
its an amazing story. :)
person Crysan
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update again soon and could you possibly work on the spelling and grammar? But it is a Very good story and I would like to read more...
person Lina03
schedule December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL, I loved this scene! Sesshoumaru really had it comming! Thank you for the update and I can't wait for more.
person wudelfin
schedule December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GODS THAT WAS JUST A PERFECT REACTION!!
schedule December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow.. i'm loving this!! good plot, decent characterization and better-than-average spelling/grammar, 7/10! I can't wait for more!
schedule December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you love leaving cliffies don't cha? i wanted to see sesshomaru's reaction to kagome acting like demoness protecting her pups. especially since she managed to draw sesshomaru's blood. update soon. i want to know what happens next.