rate_review Reviews

Great two shot, although I wish it was not based on an real person. But sadly those things happen. I know someone that has a somewhat similar problem, but it is not because of guilt they forget, it is because of fear. Again a very well written two shot with angst, drama and a shocking twist!

Good story, but I do have some questions.

My first questions reverts to the beginning of Chapter 2. You made it seem like at least the baby was alive. How can Inu Yasha get new pictures of a baby that was killed before it was born? Ale, why doesn't his father correct him for talking as if Kikyo dead even if he is in denial?

Please continue this. I can't wait for an update.

beautiful, passionate and amazing you really captured the soul and angst. this story is breathtaking and really makes you feel i love it great job and write more stories! you are a great writer!

I really liked this oneshot. Very emotional. It would be really cool if you continued this sotry. I'd like to see how Kagome recovers.

Wow! Don't really have words to describe how this story makes me feel. I love it. I would like another chapter, but it doesn't need one. Just the need to see Kagome recover.